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The Legend of Queen Opala - The Trials of Amon-Ra

A rewrite of the Legend of Queen Opala games created by Swegabe.

Beware of ~*MASSIVE*~ plot spoilers if you don't have beta release access.

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Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Memories Etched in Sand
Submitted: February 17, 2014 • Updated: October 19, 2017
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Chapter 2 - Dreams of the Fathers
Submitted: February 18, 2014 • Updated: October 19, 2017
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Chapter 3 - The Coming Storm...
Submitted: February 22, 2014 • Updated: November 1, 2017
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Chapter 4 - A Family Matter
Submitted: February 22, 2014 • Updated: November 4, 2017
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Chapter 5 - The Game Begins...
Submitted: February 23, 2014 • Updated: December 29, 2017
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Chapter 6 - The First Alliance
Submitted: February 23, 2014 • Updated: April 3, 2014
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Chapter 7 - The Journey of a Thousand Miles...
Submitted: February 23, 2014 • Updated: December 29, 2017
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Chapter 8 - Sewer Tunnel Showdown
Submitted: February 24, 2014 • Updated: December 31, 2017
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Chapter 9 - Stable Love
Submitted: February 24, 2014 • Updated: January 1, 2018
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Chapter 10 - The Players Prepare
Submitted: February 28, 2014 • Updated: April 3, 2014
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Chapter 11 - A Port in the Storm...
Submitted: March 17, 2014 • Updated: January 2, 2018
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Chapter 12 - Amon vs. Slitheros
Submitted: April 3, 2014 • Updated: January 3, 2018
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Chapter 13 - Arrival in Anthrosa
Submitted: April 7, 2014 • Updated: January 4, 2018
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Chapter 14 - New Faces Join the Fight
Submitted: April 9, 2014 • Updated: January 4, 2018
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Chapter 15 - Home Is Where The Heart Is
Submitted: July 27, 2014 • Updated: January 31, 2018
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Chapter 16 - Something to Fight For
Submitted: September 11, 2014 • Updated: January 31, 2018
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Chapter 17 - A Father's Advice
Submitted: September 18, 2014 • Updated: January 31, 2018
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Chapter 18 - Amon vs. Naacia the Dream Haunter
Submitted: September 18, 2014 • Updated: January 31, 2018
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Chapter 19 - Amon vs. Valencio
Submitted: October 15, 2014 • Updated: January 31, 2018
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Chapter 20 - Attack on Athrosa! The Mortal God Awakes
Submitted: October 24, 2014 • Updated: January 31, 2018
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Chapter 21 - The Traitor is Exposed
Submitted: October 24, 2014 • Updated: January 31, 2018
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Chapter 22 - Amon vs. Osira! The Mortal God vs. the Dark Empress
Submitted: October 25, 2014 • Updated: January 31, 2018
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Chapter 23 - The Man Formerly Known as Prince
Submitted: November 1, 2014 • Updated: January 31, 2018
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Chapter 24 - The Heroes of Egypt
Submitted: November 1, 2014 • Updated: January 31, 2018
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Chapter 25 - Traitors Unleashed
Submitted: December 25, 2014 • Updated: February 1, 2018
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Chapter 26 - No Rest for the Weary
Submitted: January 17, 2015 • Updated: February 1, 2018
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Chapter 27 - The Second Storm Approaches...
Submitted: January 20, 2015 • Updated: January 20, 2015
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Chapter 28 - Passions of the Dawn
Submitted: February 18, 2015 • Updated: February 3, 2018
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Chapter 29 - A Champion's Confession
Submitted: February 23, 2015 • Updated: February 3, 2018
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Chapter 30 - Old Wounds Reopened
Submitted: March 7, 2015 • Updated: February 3, 2018
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Chapter 31 - Absence Makes the Heart Grow Fonder
Submitted: March 17, 2015 • Updated: February 3, 2018
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Chapter 32 - To Mount Falcon
Submitted: April 3, 2015 • Updated: February 3, 2018
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Chapter 33 - Enter Rüghart: Battle at the Bandit Fortress!
Submitted: April 3, 2015 • Updated: February 3, 2018
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Chapter 34 - Showdown! The Mortal God vs. Dark Knight Altum!
Submitted: April 3, 2015 • Updated: February 5, 2018
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Chapter 35 - A War of Reluctance
Submitted: April 12, 2015 • Updated: February 6, 2018
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Chapter 36 - The Battle of Thebes
Submitted: April 29, 2015 • Updated: February 6, 2018
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Chapter 37 - The Legend Continues...
Submitted: May 1, 2015 • Updated: February 6, 2018
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Chapter 38 - The Second Stage
Submitted: June 9, 2015 • Updated: June 9, 2015
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Chapter 39 - Act Two: Namaria
Submitted: June 11, 2015 • Updated: June 11, 2015
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Chapter 40 - The Hills of Sanctus
Submitted: July 3, 2015 • Updated: July 3, 2015
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Chapter 41 - The Captive King
Submitted: July 23, 2015 • Updated: February 6, 2018
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Chapter 42 - On the Road to Resteed
Submitted: July 27, 2015 • Updated: July 27, 2015
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Chapter 43 - Down But Not Out!
Submitted: August 20, 2015 • Updated: August 20, 2015
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Chapter 44 - Enter the Gunslinger: Milana!
Submitted: September 3, 2015 • Updated: September 3, 2015
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Chapter 45 - Altum's True Face
Submitted: September 9, 2015 • Updated: September 9, 2015
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Chapter 46 - Destination: Rockgard Village!
Submitted: September 16, 2015 • Updated: September 16, 2015
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Chapter 47 - The Knight Named Naluna
Submitted: September 18, 2015 • Updated: September 18, 2015
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Chapter 48 - Rescue of the Matriarch
Submitted: September 18, 2015 • Updated: October 18, 2015
Word count: 2131 • Size: 11k • Comments: 0 • views: 1095

Chapter 49 - Fishing for Answers
Submitted: October 13, 2015 • Updated: October 13, 2015
Word count: 1468 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 660

Chapter 50 - A Hot Lead
Submitted: October 13, 2015 • Updated: October 13, 2015
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Chapter 51 - The Capitol Retaken!
Submitted: October 14, 2015 • Updated: October 14, 2015
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Chapter 52 - Amon and Osira: Reunion of Passion
Submitted: October 16, 2015 • Updated: October 16, 2015
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Chapter 53 - A Mother's Suffering
Submitted: October 17, 2015 • Updated: October 17, 2015
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Chapter 54 - Warrior Women of the Royal Family
Submitted: October 18, 2015 • Updated: October 18, 2015
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Chapter 55 - An Unexpected Partnership
Submitted: October 18, 2015 • Updated: October 18, 2015
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Chapter 56 - Battle of Frontier Aqueduct! Queen Opala Abducted!
Submitted: October 18, 2015 • Updated: October 18, 2015
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Chapter 57 - A Father's Dying Wish
Submitted: October 20, 2015 • Updated: October 20, 2015
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Chapter 58 - Enter: The King of Namaria
Submitted: October 20, 2015 • Updated: October 20, 2015
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Chapter 59 - Royal Aid! Destination: Mount Dreadclaw!
Submitted: October 21, 2015 • Updated: October 21, 2015
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Chapter 60 - Deceiving the Dark Emperor!
Submitted: October 22, 2015 • Updated: October 22, 2015
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Chapter 61 - Showdown at Mount Dreadclaw! The Assassin Returns!
Submitted: October 23, 2015 • Updated: October 23, 2015
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Chapter 62 - An Unexpected Encounter
Submitted: October 25, 2015 • Updated: October 25, 2015
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Chapter 63 - The Young Royals, Reunited
Submitted: November 22, 2015 • Updated: November 22, 2015
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Chapter 64 - The Shadow of Doubt
Submitted: December 24, 2015 • Updated: December 24, 2015
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Chapter 65 - Divide and Conquer!
Submitted: December 31, 2015 • Updated: December 31, 2015
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Chapter 66 - Infiltration! Into the Black Eagle Fortress!
Submitted: January 1, 2016 • Updated: January 1, 2016
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Chapter 67 - Death of a Mercenary
Submitted: January 5, 2016 • Updated: January 5, 2016
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Chapter 68 - Round Two! Amon vs. Altum!
Submitted: January 14, 2016 • Updated: January 14, 2016
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Chapter 69 - Revelations
Submitted: February 3, 2016 • Updated: February 3, 2016
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Chapter 70 - Seth's Last Stand
Submitted: February 13, 2016 • Updated: February 13, 2016
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Chapter 71 - Passion of the Pharaoh
Submitted: February 17, 2016 • Updated: February 17, 2016
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Chapter 72 - Meditations
Submitted: February 22, 2016 • Updated: February 22, 2016
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Chapter 73 - Securing Passage
Submitted: March 2, 2016 • Updated: March 2, 2016
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Chapter 74 - Departure
Submitted: March 13, 2016 • Updated: March 13, 2016
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Chapter 75 - Trouble At Sea
Submitted: March 16, 2016 • Updated: March 16, 2016
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Chapter 76 - The Dragon of the North
Submitted: March 17, 2016 • Updated: March 17, 2016
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Chapter 77 - The Mortal God's Wrath! Transformation: Gravehound!
Submitted: March 17, 2016 • Updated: March 17, 2016
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Chapter 78 - An Unlikely Ally: Valencio the Assassin!
Submitted: March 22, 2016 • Updated: March 22, 2016
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Chapter 79 - A Song in Solheim
Submitted: May 1, 2016 • Updated: May 1, 2016
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Chapter 80 - The Dream Haunter Returns
Submitted: May 5, 2016 • Updated: May 5, 2016
Word count: 1331 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 522

Chapter 81 - Return to Sanctus
Submitted: May 8, 2016 • Updated: May 8, 2016
Word count: 1616 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 504

Chapter 82 - Altum's Hatred
Submitted: May 10, 2016 • Updated: May 10, 2016
Word count: 1130 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 484

Chapter 83 - The Curse of Selket
Submitted: May 13, 2016 • Updated: May 13, 2016
Word count: 1308 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 543

Chapter 84 - Hope and Healing
Submitted: May 19, 2016 • Updated: May 19, 2016
Word count: 1452 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 600

Chapter 85 - Inheritance
Submitted: May 24, 2016 • Updated: May 24, 2016
Word count: 702 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 549

Chapter 86 - Reason to Fight
Submitted: June 1, 2016 • Updated: June 1, 2016
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Chapter 87 - Preparations
Submitted: June 12, 2016 • Updated: June 12, 2016
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Chapter 88 - Return to Aideen
Submitted: June 19, 2016 • Updated: June 19, 2016
Word count: 1712 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 453

Chapter 89 - Stopping the Flood
Submitted: July 3, 2016 • Updated: July 3, 2016
Word count: 1568 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 450

Chapter 90 - Bastorahl's Puppet
Submitted: July 17, 2016 • Updated: July 17, 2016
Word count: 972 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 495

Chapter 91 - The End of an Emperor
Submitted: July 21, 2016 • Updated: July 21, 2016
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Chapter 92 - Nightmare's End
Submitted: August 5, 2016 • Updated: August 5, 2016
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Chapter 93 - The Late Arrival
Submitted: August 6, 2016 • Updated: August 6, 2016
Word count: 1402 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 462

Chapter 94 - Amon vs. Eclipse: Fist of the Demon Gate
Submitted: August 6, 2016 • Updated: August 6, 2016
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Chapter 95 - A God's Judgment
Submitted: August 8, 2016 • Updated: August 8, 2016
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Chapter 96 - The Return
Submitted: August 14, 2016 • Updated: August 14, 2016
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Chapter 97 - A Mother's Love
Submitted: August 18, 2016 • Updated: August 18, 2016
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Chapter 98 - Osira's Other Side
Submitted: August 20, 2016 • Updated: August 20, 2016
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Chapter 99 - Double-Stuffed Queen
Submitted: August 21, 2016 • Updated: August 21, 2016
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Chapter 100 - Amon and Naluna; Passion in the Palace Baths
Submitted: August 28, 2016 • Updated: August 28, 2016
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Chapter 101 - Passion and Power
Submitted: August 30, 2016 • Updated: August 30, 2016
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Chapter 102 - Morning Fun
Submitted: September 4, 2016 • Updated: September 4, 2016
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Chapter 103 - Amon's Conflicted Heart
Submitted: September 4, 2016 • Updated: September 4, 2016
Word count: 1274 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 544

Chapter 104 - The Third Stage: Beldoria
Submitted: September 4, 2016 • Updated: September 4, 2016
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Chapter 105 - Devon's Return
Submitted: September 14, 2016 • Updated: September 14, 2016
Word count: 1524 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 520

Chapter 106 - A Face out of Place
Submitted: September 19, 2016 • Updated: September 19, 2016
Word count: 1800 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 538

Chapter 107 - Clown and Spy
Submitted: September 22, 2016 • Updated: September 22, 2016
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Chapter 108 - Framed! The Destruction of Caimridge!
Submitted: September 24, 2016 • Updated: September 24, 2016
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Chapter 109 - A Demon in Darkthorn
Submitted: September 27, 2016 • Updated: September 27, 2016
Word count: 2316 • Size: 11k • Comments: 0 • views: 495

Chapter 110 - Escape! Enter, New Friends
Submitted: October 8, 2016 • Updated: October 8, 2016
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Chapter 111 - A Pharaoh's Prey
Submitted: October 15, 2016 • Updated: October 15, 2016
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Chapter 112 - Tender Hearts
Submitted: October 23, 2016 • Updated: October 23, 2016
Word count: 879 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 555

Chapter 113 - The First Night; Part 1
Submitted: November 7, 2016 • Updated: November 7, 2016
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Chapter 114 - Ill Met by Moonlight
Submitted: November 16, 2016 • Updated: November 16, 2016
Word count: 1179 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 514

Chapter 115 - The First Night; Part 2
Submitted: November 28, 2016 • Updated: November 28, 2016
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Chapter 116 - The Seeds of Dissent
Submitted: December 2, 2016 • Updated: January 11, 2017
Word count: 2166 • Size: 11k • Comments: 0 • views: 485

Chapter 117 - A New Lead
Submitted: December 8, 2016 • Updated: December 8, 2016
Word count: 2776 • Size: 14k • Comments: 0 • views: 383

Chapter 118 - Enter: Kythe the Magihound!
Submitted: January 1, 2017 • Updated: January 1, 2017
Word count: 1985 • Size: 10k • Comments: 0 • views: 642

Chapter 119 - A Sudden Desire of the Pharaoh's Heart
Submitted: January 18, 2017 • Updated: January 18, 2017
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Chapter 120 - A Question of Resolve
Submitted: January 24, 2017 • Updated: January 24, 2017
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Chapter 121 - Ahead of the Hunt
Submitted: February 15, 2017 • Updated: February 17, 2017
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Chapter 122 - A New Friend: Gabrielle!
Submitted: February 17, 2017 • Updated: February 17, 2017
Word count: 1165 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 511

Chapter 123 - Night at the Mountain Inn (Part 1)
Submitted: March 11, 2017 • Updated: March 11, 2017
Word count: 1583 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 681

Chapter 124 - Night at the Mountain Inn (Part 2)
Submitted: March 11, 2017 • Updated: March 11, 2017
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Chapter 125 - Masquerade's New target and Crayden's Second Mistake
Submitted: March 13, 2017 • Updated: March 13, 2017
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Chapter 126 - Arrival in Brightstone
Submitted: March 15, 2017 • Updated: March 15, 2017
Word count: 996 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 408

Chapter 127 - An Unusual Lead
Submitted: March 25, 2017 • Updated: March 25, 2017
Word count: 1175 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 353

Chapter 128 - A New Ally
Submitted: April 3, 2017 • Updated: April 3, 2017
Word count: 1414 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 387

Chapter 129 - The Crimson Forest
Submitted: April 8, 2017 • Updated: April 8, 2017
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Chapter 130 - Hikari and Kurai Explained!
Submitted: April 19, 2017 • Updated: April 19, 2017
Word count: 1427 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 316

Chapter 131 - Alphas Collide! The Mortal God and the Demon Beast Meet
Submitted: May 13, 2017 • Updated: February 12, 2018
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Chapter 132 - When Past Meets Future
Submitted: May 26, 2017 • Updated: May 26, 2017
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Chapter 133 - Laquadia's Decision
Submitted: May 28, 2017 • Updated: May 28, 2017
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Chapter 134 - Wilheed's Secret
Submitted: May 28, 2017 • Updated: May 28, 2017
Word count: 1574 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 426

Chapter 135 - The Jester's Encore
Submitted: May 28, 2017 • Updated: May 28, 2017
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Chapter 136 - The Demon's Resolve
Submitted: May 30, 2017 • Updated: May 30, 2017
Word count: 1014 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 398

Chapter 137 - Plans for the Gathering
Submitted: May 30, 2017 • Updated: May 30, 2017
Word count: 1028 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 355

Chapter 138 - An Unexpected Encounter
Submitted: May 30, 2017 • Updated: May 30, 2017
Word count: 969 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 462

Chapter 139 - Alpha Discussion
Submitted: June 20, 2017 • Updated: June 20, 2017
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Chapter 140 - Alpha Discussion - Part 2
Submitted: July 1, 2017 • Updated: July 1, 2017
Word count: 927 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 475

Chapter 141 - To the Gathering
Submitted: July 1, 2017 • Updated: July 1, 2017
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Chapter 142 - The High Lord Gathering
Submitted: July 1, 2017 • Updated: July 1, 2017
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Chapter 143 - Enter: Lord Susano'o of the Wind
Submitted: July 1, 2017 • Updated: July 1, 2017
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Chapter 144 - The Offer Explained
Submitted: August 1, 2017 • Updated: August 1, 2017
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Chapter 145 - The Break-In
Submitted: August 3, 2017 • Updated: August 3, 2017
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Chapter 146 - Mhu'Tiki Joins the Party
Submitted: August 28, 2017 • Updated: August 28, 2017
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Chapter 147 - An Unwanted Encounter
Submitted: August 28, 2017 • Updated: August 28, 2017
Word count: 1105 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 398

Chapter 148 - Defection
Submitted: August 30, 2017 • Updated: August 30, 2017
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Chapter 149 - To Arlon
Submitted: January 1, 2018 • Updated: January 1, 2018
Word count: 1882 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 403

Chapter 150 - The Paladin Defects
Submitted: February 18, 2018 • Updated: February 18, 2018
Word count: 1548 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 346

Chapter 151 - To Warrengard
Submitted: March 15, 2018 • Updated: March 15, 2018
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Chapter 152 - Taking Warrengard
Submitted: April 8, 2018 • Updated: April 8, 2018
Word count: 2213 • Size: 11k • Comments: 0 • views: 266

Chapter 153 - Looming Threat and the New Lord of Warrengard
Submitted: May 17, 2018 • Updated: May 17, 2018
Word count: 2195 • Size: 11k • Comments: 0 • views: 245

Chapter 154 - Welcome to the Family
Submitted: June 1, 2018 • Updated: June 1, 2018
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Chapter 155 - Kahr: The City of Sand
Submitted: July 4, 2018 • Updated: July 4, 2018
Word count: 3083 • Size: 15k • Comments: 0 • views: 315

Chapter 156 - Sibling Bonding
Submitted: August 1, 2018 • Updated: August 1, 2018
Word count: 1627 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 675

Chapter 157 - The Real Threat
Submitted: September 6, 2018 • Updated: September 6, 2018
Word count: 3047 • Size: 15k • Comments: 0 • views: 417

Chapter 158 - The First Spire Falls
Submitted: October 1, 2018 • Updated: October 1, 2018
Word count: 2654 • Size: 13k • Comments: 0 • views: 244

Chapter 159 - Kythie Emerges
Submitted: November 1, 2018 • Updated: November 1, 2018
Word count: 1223 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 444

Chapter 160 - A Time of Rest - Part 1
Submitted: February 17, 2019 • Updated: February 17, 2019
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Chapter 161 - A Time of Rest - Part 2
Submitted: December 24, 2019 • Updated: December 24, 2019
Word count: 1785 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 216

Chapter 162 - The Illusian Forest
Submitted: January 1, 2020 • Updated: January 1, 2020
Word count: 1840 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 139

Chapter 163 - Fatherly Advice
Submitted: February 17, 2020 • Updated: February 17, 2020
Word count: 1479 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 146

Chapter 164 - To Odidania
Submitted: March 16, 2020 • Updated: March 16, 2020
Word count: 1875 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 85

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trainhobo117 on February 18, 2020, 6:09:36 PM

trainhobo117 on (Chapter: index)
trainhobo117I have to say--NO. I WANT to say that you really don't fail to amuse. To be honest I've been reading this since the day I actually praised and commented on the first chapter.

LordHigurashi on February 21, 2020, 10:54:18 PM

LordHigurashi on (Chapter: index)
LordHigurashiThank you, but... I'm a little confused by your phrasing, to be honest

trainhobo117 on February 26, 2020, 2:19:23 AM

trainhobo117 on (Chapter: index)
trainhobo117My english is not that great, so I'll keep it brief as possible. Still I'm surprised that you kept the story ongoing which kept me busy all the time.

LordHigurashi on March 15, 2020, 10:55:49 PM

LordHigurashi on (Chapter: index)
LordHigurashiYeah, well, I don't plan on leaving this unfinished, just like Gabe isn't done making the series yet, either

Isatis on December 24, 2019, 1:31:51 PM

Isatis on (Chapter: index)
IsatisFirst: Welcome back and glad to see this again!
Second: blissfully unaware of her true role in history; Both in the wider world around her, and concerning the man beneath her...

This referring to what already happened in previous chapters, or is Amon *drum roll* his own father?!

LordHigurashi on December 24, 2019, 2:12:26 PM

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LordHigurashiHonestly, I've been TOYING with that idea ever since I found out Origin had some manner of time-travel in its plot, but I've been unsure up to this point whether or not I REALLY wanted to pull a Philip Fry from Futurama, but that plot twist is riddled with plot HOLES when you get into the temporal mechanics and theoretical physics involved. Since the identity of the Late Pharaoh--Opala and Osira's father--is yet to be explicitly revealed in the games--as far as I know--but the Younger Farah is the right AGE to become pregnant with Osira based on the ages of the women in the FIRST game--which are their levels when you recruit them into your party--it IS very possible for Amon to sire his own sister and go back with Farah when she's returned to her time, but it would result in a causality loop that ultimately removes Amon from the story entirely.

As for whether or not it's also referring to older chapters, technically yeah because she has yet to experience what the elder Farah has gone through--for better or worse--and that she has no real idea what her true relation to Amon actually is. I phrased it like that to leave it up to interpreting and to keep me from writing myself TOO deep into a corner that I can't get out of without an ex machina.

Isatis on December 24, 2019, 2:16:14 PM

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IsatisYeah, i was joking really. Time travel shenanigans get complicated further if you had gone that route. Younger Farah not yet having a clue as to Amon being her own son and the shenanigans that come later make more sense.

LordHigurashi on December 24, 2019, 2:31:19 PM

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LordHigurashiI still want to GO that route since I did write a lot of early scenes with the Late Pharaoh as having this... almost prophetic knowledge of the shit that would go down and the impact his son would have on the events to come, but like you said, the time travel shenanigans Altum is pulling in Origin complicate things. I can't even think of a way to make everything work as I write this reply. I WILL obviously continue to go back and EDIT older chapters as the story unfolds to make everything flow together more seamlessly, since I've been writing most of what isn't directly lifted from the games completely on the spot as I play. There are gonna be plot holes. There are gonna be things that don't make sense. Everything about my rewrite and the series proper is still a WIP, after all

Isatis on December 24, 2019, 2:34:29 PM

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IsatisIs Amon reconciling the sisters (Osira and Opala) still gonna be a thing? The shenanigans with Farah as well? If yes, then have at it with the re-write. Might have to keep a [re rewrite log somewhere to see what changed down the road.

LordHigurashi on December 24, 2019, 2:41:05 PM

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LordHigurashiOf course. As for Younger Farah... I don't know. I'm playing that part by ear

Isatis on December 24, 2019, 2:44:26 PM

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IsatisI was referring to older Farah there, not the younger.  I'll stay wait and see what happens with younger. With so much already written, it's going to be a daunting task.

LordHigurashi on December 24, 2019, 2:49:52 PM

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LordHigurashiAmon would never stop loving his mother. So yes, the mother-son shenanigans will continue XD And yeah. There's almost 6 years worth of work here... That's not exactly a quick edit

Isatis on December 24, 2019, 2:53:30 PM

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IsatisGood to know. Well, I'll go ahead and pull a re-read of everything. Been a while since i did.

LordHigurashi on December 24, 2019, 2:55:27 PM

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LordHigurashiSome of the older chapters have already undergone tweaks to improve the story quality, so... things might be a little off XD

Isatis on December 25, 2019, 3:58:49 AM

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IsatisOff? Let's find out.

LordHigurashi on December 25, 2019, 6:06:38 AM

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LordHigurashiWell, I mean, like, there may be some things that don't quite line up right

Isatis on February 17, 2019, 10:56:24 PM

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IsatisWelcome back! Looking forward to more of your story. To my great annoyance, my PC cant run any of Gabe's series. There's always 'one' file missing that crashes the whole thing. Love how Amon and Farah are still together regardless of who he's with. Devon has lay claim to Beatrix so to each his own. I'll follow along this story to its conclusion (and until such a time i can get the game to run). Til next time amigo.

LordHigurashi on June 12, 2019, 10:13:30 PM

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LordHigurashiMore IS coming, I've just been dealing with a lot of stuff IRL that's been slowing me down. I wanted to do some more smut before I get back to the actual plot, and I actually have some of THOSE chapters done already for whenever I've satisfied the lust of my readers

trainhobo117 on April 9, 2018, 12:40:59 AM

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trainhobo117I know I might sound little bias and even though Amon is your own character, but I actually do find reading this so much more better since the fanfic feels more expanded. Much as i enjoy the LoQO universe, I just felt that a Pharoh is missing. (Yeah, yeah I played both of the episodes, only game I haven't played was LoQO Origins).

LordHigurashi on April 9, 2018, 2:44:26 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, thank you for your praise. Amon's undergone a lot of changes since I originally started this, but I've tried to integrate his character into the story in a way that alters it while staying true to Gabe's original plot without having him steal the spotlight too much. The only place I can really say my version is better than the originals is in my handling of the first game's events, since the party members you recruit never had any part in the story, and after I started playing LoQOII, I thought this was a big weakness of the first game, and I tried to improve upon it by giving them more of an active role.
As for Amon himself, I've been trying really hard to keep him from becoming a Gary Stu character. Especially since I decided to give him superhuman physical prowess as well as his ability to transform into avatars of the gods. That's part of the reason I've altered the events as much as I have; To give him his own goals rather than making him lead the actual Player Characters from the games like Jake and Kai through their own adventures. Osira's redemption was not only one of these personal objectives, but also something I would like to see by the end of the actual series. I feel like she can actually be redeemed, if not forgiven. To sum that up simply, Amon's goals are like a side-story going on parallel to the stories of the games. The times they blend together are usually due to circumstance or a mutual objective.
And where my splitting of Naluna and Altum into separate entities is concerned, that was more of a matter of addressing a plot point that still confuses me and trying to resolve it without disrupting the lore too much. Since I never actually finished LoQOII, I'm probably missing some bit of info that makes it make sense, but I'm too far along in my story to really alter that part again, but I'm always editing and tweaking past work, so if I need to, I will at some point down the line.
And since you haven't gotten into Origin yet, I won't talk about Devon and that whole part of the plot until you get there. Anyway, thanks for reading, and keep checking back for more each month.

trainhobo117 on June 1, 2018, 8:35:54 AM

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trainhobo117When I think about the name Amon and I know it's based off the name of Amon Ra or Amun, at first I thought it was based off  Hebrew name which is fairly common and does actually sound like Amon of Judah.

LordHigurashi on June 1, 2018, 10:26:38 AM

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LordHigurashiThe thing with Amon's name is that I knew it was a very recognizable Egyptian name, and that it wouldn't be unusual for a prince to be named after the very first Pharaoh, Amon-Ra, periodically throughout history. Likewise, Amon's golden falcon was named Amun-Re, both because it is a magical extension of his own being, as well as another name Ra has been associated with, who also has the head of a falcon (or a bald eagle if you've ever played Smite and used the Ra'merica skin XD). Also, his nickname and reputation as 'the Mortal God of Egypt' is itself a reference to the very first Pharaoh who was believed to have been Ra himself in mortal form. I did my homework before making this character :P

Dank2 on February 12, 2018, 8:48:19 AM

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Dank2Please please please make an episode souled focusing on titty fucking elder Farah, her tits/titty fucking in general are under underutilized. Maybe a spell happens and she needs to use her tits as only pleasure. 

LordHigurashi on February 12, 2018, 7:36:59 PM

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LordHigurashiIt's on my list. In fact, I have a titty-fuck marathon planned with all Amon's women for exactly that reason. Laquadia's are too big to NOT do a scene with, and Farah really doesn't get enough titty-fuck scenes in the game. Only two with elder Farah come to mind that actually have art to go with them, and they're both optional scenes. But, I try to give my readers what they want, so when I reach an appropriate point for sexy shenanigans to happen again, expect multiple titty-fucks

Isatis on June 22, 2017, 1:38:33 PM

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IsatisHandling the desires of one Farah is one thing. Handling the desires of two is another. Looks like Amon was *put on sunglasses* overwhelmed

YEAHHHHHHH!!!!!!

LordHigurashi on June 22, 2017, 2:36:56 PM

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LordHigurashiFor once in his life, the Mortal God was a one-pump chump, but under the circumstances, I think he can be forgiven

Ultrasound7 on June 20, 2017, 10:03:35 AM

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Ultrasound7So I guess Amon's children have been born already, when did that happen, and who are they? And what's this about a Laquadia? 

LordHigurashi on June 20, 2017, 10:19:18 AM

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LordHigurashiLaquadia's a HUGE part of Origin's plot, so if you don't know who she is, you either haven't played the game yet, or you just haven't been paying attention.

As for Amon's children, they are currently in Egypt, under the watchful eye of Jake and the others from the FIRST game.

Isatis on May 28, 2017, 3:39:13 AM

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IsatisWow, Osira must have been seriously backed up if she folded this quickly. I honestly expected Osira having to do this multiple times before Laquadia snapped. No biggie.

LordHigurashi on May 28, 2017, 7:29:52 AM

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LordHigurashiWell, think about it this way: Laquadia wants her brother to treat her like a lover, but he's acting more like she's just a doll . And then Osira comes to her and offers her an alternative. Honestly, I'd think she'd take it since it's becoming more and more apparent that Crayden is just using her for his own ambitions

Isatis on May 28, 2017, 3:32:58 AM

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IsatisFarah and Young Farah meet, the two don't recognize each other (not for a good while apparently), Amon explains his reasons for being territorial, nicknames get given and everyone gets drunk. Finally, Amon gets frisky with Naluna. All in all, good times. You're on a roll with the updates, I just woke up to find three more chapters. Your muse must be on overdrive or you just finished playing Gabe's release.

LordHigurashi on May 28, 2017, 7:26:46 AM

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LordHigurashiActually, I've had all these on hold for almost 2 months, but I'd been trying to pace them out. Last night, I finally gave in and just uploaded everything up to the end of Chapter 1

Isatis on April 8, 2017, 8:01:36 PM

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IsatisIt's finally out? Holy crap! Gotta go try it out then. Lol, Farah affectionate as usual.

LordHigurashi on April 8, 2017, 8:35:45 PM

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LordHigurashiShould be. Gabe said the public release would be April 8th

Isatis on March 12, 2017, 7:45:27 AM

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IsatisAnd Gabrielle from out of nowhere. Well executed, Lord Higurashi.

LordHigurashi on March 12, 2017, 8:17:32 AM

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LordHigurashiWell, she IS the creator's persona, so she deserves some love to. Plus, I have some funny moments in mind for her, as you'll see. The next couple chapters will be pretty dialogue heavy, so enjoy the sexy stuff where it shows up 

Isatis on March 12, 2017, 11:37:30 AM

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IsatisWill do.

LordHigurashi on March 12, 2017, 11:43:50 AM

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LordHigurashiI actually just reached the Crimson Forest in my playthrough, so it won't be long before things get REALLY steamy. Next chapter should be up later tonight

Isatis on March 12, 2017, 11:46:20 AM

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IsatisYou are a writing machine, lol!

LordHigurashi on March 12, 2017, 1:25:05 PM

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LordHigurashiWhat can I say? Origin REALLY gets more fun once you get to the Nobility Plains. You get to start doing the Tavern Wench Challenge with Gabrielle, you get to use the beach, and we get two Farahs for the price of one! There is NO shortage of fun, sexy content to work with once you get this far into the game.

Isatis on March 10, 2017, 5:02:47 PM

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IsatisI'm glad in this scene all Devon got was a blowjob from Farah. I'm already too invested seeing her together with Amon. I suppose Adult Farah will be hanging around with Amon?

LordHigurashi on March 10, 2017, 6:08:40 PM

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LordHigurashiWow, rooting against the protagonist of the game in favor of MY persona? Didn't think I made him THAT likable XD Well, if you want a scene with Young Farah and Amon, I'll gladly deliver. Shouldn't be too hard, given their personalities. I actually originally wanted to do a sort of Futurama parody where it turns out Amon is his own father when I first found out that Origin would feature Farah in her youth, but when it turned out to be a sequel instead of a prequel, I had to scrap it.

On that note, you'll be happy to know that I'm NOT shipping Devon and Young Farah. I want to have Devon wind up with Beatrix, cuz I always thought there was some mutual attraction there. I don't know how many people know about this, but there's a brief encounter with Beatrix in the bath hall when you come back from Caimridge, just before Devon gets framed. In it, Devon sees Beatrix naked, but she doesn't really do anything to discourage him from checking her out or complimenting her figure, so if Devon's gonna wind up with ANYONE in my version, it'll probably be Beatrix.

As for Adult Farah, I really don't know what I'm gonna do with her. Honestly, I think my last few chapters have been a little weak as far as quality goes when it comes to the Amon side of the plot. Hopefully I'll get some better ideas once I get farther in the game. There WILL be a threesome scene between both Farahs and Amon in the future, I just don't know WHEN I'll get a chance to do it. I just know it'll happen and writing it will be both fun and dangerous to my health XD

trilljacker6534 on December 1, 2016, 8:28:43 PM

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trilljacker6534Will Kythe be joining in on the fun next time with them.

LordHigurashi on December 1, 2016, 8:31:56 PM

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LordHigurashiI don't think so. It might be more fun to have the side-relationship with Gabrielle and Kythe, but I'll see how I feel when I get to it

Isatis on November 28, 2016, 3:11:16 AM

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IsatisAnd now it starts. Hopefully, Devon's actions with Farah don't affect Amon's moments with adult Farah all 'Back to the future' by negating events that occur. Devon with young Farah, Amon with older Farah. Let's see how that goes.

LordHigurashi on November 28, 2016, 4:29:29 AM

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LordHigurashiThat's a legitimate concern, especially since my rewrite alters history anyway, but I'm pretty sure we're looking at magic-based time travel, which I would assume corrects all paradoxes

Isatis on November 28, 2016, 4:35:26 AM

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IsatisOr maybe creates another timeline? One where Farah/Amon/Opala/Osira/Naluna are still together and you have this time line where Young Fara.....wait a minute. Young Farah was brought to the future. Amon didn't go back to the past. UNless Young Farah marries somebody hat is not the pharaoh when she goes back. If Devon is a god in this timeline, hopefully he doesn't go looking for Farah since the Egyptian gods already called dibs on her. 

Man, I am looking way too much into this.

LordHigurashi on November 28, 2016, 8:17:54 AM

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LordHigurashiI've spent the last three hours trying to apply logic to Origin's temporal mechanics, and I can't figure it out either. I don't even think Gabe herself knows, and I think even more that she just doesn't give a shit about the logistics of it since it's a fantasy game where magic is a thing and expects us to just accept magic time travel for the sake of the plot. And quite honestly, I'm inclined to agree with her. I'll also admit to never actually finishing LOQO2, so I may be missing some detail that makes all this make sense, but that could just be me overthinking the game as I so often overthink all media.

As far as I can tell you in regards to my own version of the story, Amon and Devon will be rivals for a bit, and their interactions will actually be kinda limited as they each have their own goals. Since Episode 2 isn't gonna be public for at least another couple weeks, I can't really plan too far ahead, but my past motivations for Amon in the context of Origin's events remains unchanged; Beyond his role as a diplomat on behalf of Namaria, he doesn't really care one way or the other about the Beldorian Empire's politics as he is neither a citizen nor an actual ally of the Empire. He's there to do his job, deal with Altum, and hopefully find a way to save Osira from the Seprent God. How he handles meeting his mother's younger self and Devon isn't something I can easily predict beyond a feeling of deja vu and the two men not really seeing eye-to-eye at first.

As for Devon, he obviously has his own issues and won't really have the time or feel the need to get involved with Amon's affairs. As far as I know about Origin's plot, Amon and Devon's goals won't intersect much until further down the line. Laquadia, the Jadeite Order, and Young Farah are about the only common links between them at this point.

And it doesn't matter WHAT Devon is in my version; No one comes between Amon-Ra and his mother XD And anyone crazy enough to try is taking their life into their hands

trilljacker6534 on October 8, 2016, 6:41:53 AM

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trilljacker6534Fun to see Gabe screwing up as a thief and then putting the guards under his Tsukuyomi's nightmare realm.

LordHigurashi on October 8, 2016, 9:32:24 AM

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LordHigurashiI'll admit, I WAS inspired to make the Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi based on the abilities of the Mangekyou Sharingan, but only because I like those concepts and I wanted to have some fun with my version of Devon. That's the whole reason I've made him a demon instead of some kind of anthro

trilljacker6534 on September 27, 2016, 8:06:37 PM

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trilljacker6534I did the same thing too in the game and she deserves it

LordHigurashi on September 27, 2016, 8:11:24 PM

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LordHigurashiPretty sure everyone does, since collecting all the art is half the fun

trilljacker6534 on September 24, 2016, 12:17:32 PM

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trilljacker6534Crayden just mess with the wrong beastman and Devon will get his revenge.

LordHigurashi on September 24, 2016, 12:28:59 PM

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LordHigurashiThe clear lesson here is NEVER throw a guy who can rip you apart with his bare hands under the bus; It only pisses him off

trilljacker6534 on September 22, 2016, 3:31:29 PM

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trilljacker6534Devon better pack up and leave that empire before something happens to him.

LordHigurashi on September 22, 2016, 3:41:46 PM

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LordHigurashiOh, but where's the plot to go if he doesn't learn the dark secret of the Jadeite Order? Plus, catching Laquadia off guard in Darkthorn Keep is tool good a scene to pass up, especially with my Devon. I'll admit I was watching a lot of Inuyasha and reading up on shinto mythology when I started writing the stuff for Origin, so I thought; Make Beastman Devon a wolf demon and see how it goes over. My version IS very much inspired by Sesshomaru and Inu no Taisho in how I picture him in my head, though his 'true form' will remain similar to how he looks in the game  

trilljacker6534 on September 14, 2016, 10:50:17 AM

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trilljacker6534I bet it will be hard to do now with just the first part of the game and which version of Devon did you chose?

LordHigurashi on September 14, 2016, 2:16:17 PM

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LordHigurashiBeastman, but I decided to do something a little different with MY version. And Episode 2 will be out between the end of this year or early next year. My Devon, however, isn't like any version Gabe offers

Isatis on September 4, 2016, 11:18:37 AM

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IsatisSo it begins...a new chapter

LordHigurashi on September 4, 2016, 11:32:14 AM

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LordHigurashiAnd the last one I post for a while. I felt I owed the setup just so you would have an idea of what was coming

Isatis on September 4, 2016, 11:40:45 AM

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IsatisThat's cool. RL stuff always comes first. Take care of that.

LordHigurashi on September 4, 2016, 11:45:43 AM

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LordHigurashiWell, it's more a matter of pacing than anything. Episode 2 won't be released to the general public for another couple months at least, and I don't wanna accidentally run out of story before that happens. Hiatus due to writer's block is one thing. Hiatus cuz I've run out of content period is another

trilljacker6534 on September 4, 2016, 11:01:55 AM

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trilljacker6534looks like they are about to go on another quest.

LordHigurashi on September 4, 2016, 11:03:00 AM

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LordHigurashiYes, but they'll be out of the spotlight for quite some time

Isatis on September 4, 2016, 9:27:55 AM

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IsatisI don't know the grinning emoticon but doing it now anyways .  Never imagined how much he hated Altum but wouldn't Naluna be a wee bit disturbed at what goes through his head? Glad, you went with the idea of getting them all pregnant. Amon's going to be busy in the future. Question though: while the events of Origin are going on, whose going to watch the kids while the parents are off doing the diplomatic work and Osira doing her Laquadia subversion thing?  Royals must have a lot of babysitters on hand then. Odd detail but I'm going to place here anyways; Naluna isn't quite as pale now as she arrived is she? She went from the cave she was living to the hot sunny area of Egypt, must have acquired a nice tan. Thanks for the chap, nothing insightful to add aside from the succubus thing. Their first meeting must have been interesting. tried to feed on Amon only to realize she couldn't and get fed on instead. The rapid updates are always awesome. Looking forward to Origin's events. Till next time

LordHigurashi on September 4, 2016, 9:49:49 AM

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LordHigurashiWell, Altum DID betray them and began to harbor a personal grudge towards Farah, so it shouldn't come as a surprise that Amon despises her. As for Naluna, she's aware of Amon's thoughts toward Altum, and while she's a constant reminder of the Dark Knight, her personality and presence she gives off are much more gentle, allowing Amon to look past the physical similarities and discern between them. You'll notice he doesn't even refer to Altum by her real name anymore; Only her title as the legendary Dark Knight. As for who'll be taking care of the kids, I would've thought that'd be obvious XD Jake and Tirah will of course be watching over the kids, while Dargon will tend to any medical and educational needs. They'll be in good hands. And whether this makes sense or not, I want to keep Naluna fair-skinned, as I find the mental image VERY enticing and a good contrast to the exotic tan of the Egyptians. You're very welcome, and Naacia and Amon have actually had a few encounters prior to this. The first was in Greece like in the first game where she tried to lure him in with twisted dreams but he saw through her illusions. The second was in Solheim, after his first transformation and subsequent killing of Rughart, where Naacia once again tried to claim Amon's soul but he was able to turn the tables on her and establish his dominance as his own powers had grown stronger, allowing him to bind her to his command. And this isn't actually their third encounter. During my timeskips, Amon has made frequent visits to Naacia while he slept to have sex with her and allow her to indulge in some of her own fantasies as a reward for no longer twisting his dreams.
Thanks ^_^ I've been looking forward to tackling Origin, both as in for my rewrite and actually PLAYING it, so I've been trying to get a good amount of chapters out now since Origins events (at least for me) will hit a wall after the fight with Masquerade until the this year at the earliest, as Gabe told me herself that she estimates Episode 2's release will be either the end of this year or early next year. That being said, now that I've begun rewriting Origin, chapters will be slower to come out as I'll need to pace my updates so that I don't leave my readers in limbo while I wait for Episode 2 to be released publicly. That being said, I must return to my work. I have a LOT of grinding to do since I won't have an Easy Mode to power me up from the start XD

trilljacker6534 on September 4, 2016, 7:31:01 AM

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trilljacker6534Love the scene and looks like Amon will find no rest in his dreams either.

Isatis on August 30, 2016, 6:51:23 PM

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Isatis....and AMon knocks Naluna up. Methinks a certain egyptian boob goddess will be upset she wasn't first but the foreigner was. WOn't there be succession problems with Naluna's child being the firstborn as opposed to any potential children sired with Oppala, Osira, or Fara....I'm thinking too much about this. FOrget I said anyting.

LordHigurashi on August 30, 2016, 8:57:07 PM

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LordHigurashiActually, I was stuck on the ending to this chapter for EXACTLY that reason. I still don't really have a solution, as this REALLY breaks from Gabe's canon and we're now thoroughly in MY world, but I'm certain Amon will figure out a way to avoid the family history repeating itself. He's not ALL brawn and sexual prowess, ya know XD

Isatis on August 30, 2016, 9:11:44 PM

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Isatis[but I'm certain Amon will figure out a way to avoid the family history repeating itself. He's not ALL brawn and sexual prowess, ya know XD]

I'll see that in writing. You could mention that Farah, Osira, Opala were knocked up offscreen. For the Egyptian gods to pass those three up especially Farah who's hyper fertile and constantly talks about kids in game, it hits my SOD that Naluna would be knocked up first though it does help her out since she's been trying to increase her race's numbers in game. Wouldn't that be a surprise for Altum? She's going to all that trouble to revive her species, and it her nicer twin that gets pregnant.

LordHigurashi on August 30, 2016, 9:31:33 PM

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LordHigurashiThat's the plan XD Hell, if Altum hadn't turned against them out of spite for Farah's hyper-fertility, she might be in Naluna's position. But, I'm not entirely sure what I'm gonna do with Altum, since it's not clear how involved she is in Origin. We know she's responsible for swiping Farah in the past and bringing her out of time to the present, and it's implied that she's the one causing all the rips in space-time that Ilumi wants Devon to fix, but other than that, we haven't actually seen Altum since the end of LoQO2, so she could be up to anything. And I'm not leaving the others out of the baby boom, don't worry. But the most likely heir will be Opala's child, as she IS the current queen and her first-born would inherit the throne by law. However, Amon may bend the rules if it keeps a repeat of Osira's ambition from occurring in the next generation, perhaps by refusing to name any successors until the children have faced and passed their own trials to determine who is ready to lead the empire, just as he did not officially become Pharaoh until he had proved he understood what it meant to BE pharaoh. I'll figure it out eventually, but I welcome suggestions XD Credit would be given where it's due, of course.

Isatis on August 31, 2016, 11:03:47 AM

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IsatisThat....is a very good plan. Leadership not by right of inheritance but physical mental and spiritual trial. Though, you can't really tell what a lid will grow up to be like but that's another story.

One may decide Osira was a sell out who abandoned  *Glorious Power!!!* for the love of her brother and reassure the contract with the serpent God but that's another story. 

I was not aware Altus was responsible for bringing young Farah into the current time-line. May have to sign up for Swegabe's Patreon for more info.
Looking forward to what happens from here on. How protective will Amon be of his mother's younger self? Devons attitude towards depends entirely on the player. Treating her as a sex slave may just earn him Amon's ire. Heh, who's gonna introduce her to the leads that happen in that game? Would be funny for Amon to cause a causality loop. Why is Farah so hypersexual in the future? Amon causes some of the incidents she's later known for.

LordHigurashi on August 31, 2016, 12:15:31 PM

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LordHigurashiExactly. The right to lead should be earned, not handed to someone just cuz they were born first or a certain gender.

As for Osira's reformation, I kinda decided on that on a whim. She's one of those villains you love to hate cuz she's so good at being a total bitch, but when I first played LoQO2 and Osira briefly joins Kai's group as a temporary ally only to betray them and IMMEDIATELY be betrayed by Altum right after, I thought to myself; Does Osira REALLY want power this badly? So I had the thought to give her something she might want MORE than power--The love and attention she seemed to have been denied that made her hate Opala in the first place. I WAS afraid people might consider it a cop-out just for the sake of giving Amon more women to fuck, but I've genuinely tried to make some kind of redemption for her character.

And while Altum isn't mentioned BY NAME, Young Farah DOES tell Devon that she was abducted by 'a woman with blonde hair and wearing pieces of black armor who seemed to know her and hated her for it'. This can only be Altum, especially since the Neverus would probably have SOME magical knowledge that would allow them to manipulate time. As for Amon's interactions with his mother's younger self, this is the whole reason I chose to 'end' the events of LoQO2 after Seth's execution. I've been super excited about Origin's plot, and getting Amon involved with the Beldorian Empire, so I tried to take LoQO2's plot as far as I could without neglecting anything really important so that I could do some more light-hearted filler chapters to kinda cover the time-skip. I'll probably do it again later when I have to wait for the next public release from Gabe (Episode 1 only goes as far as fighting Masquerade), but again, we'll cross that bridge when we come to it. Though I doubt anyone would complain about another marathon of pure smut XD.

But, I digress. Amon will ABSOLUTELY be protective of his mother's younger self, but I WILL be giving Devon the more primary role in that department, as he is the player character for Origin and shouldn't be demoted to a supporting role under my OC. That's how Mary Sues are made, and Amon was NOT intended to be an ultra-perfect, can-do-anything-and-everything type of character. He has his limitations, and he'll have his plate full just trying to deal with Lacquadia, Altum, and his duties as a father and diplomatic envoy. If anything, he may wind up ignoring Crayden entirely and leave dealing with him to Devon while he handles the female antagonists, just like he left Bastorahl to Kai and his group to finish off. Because, again, he's not a citizen of the Beldorian Empire, and he would think it's not really his place to get involved in an internal affair like a power struggle. However, since Lacquadia seems to have some connection to snakes, quite possibly even the Serpent God who Osira is trying to outsmart to get out of her end of the contract, he's going to consider her a personal matter like Altum. As for Masquerade, she's a wild card as she is an assassin with no real political agenda, like Valencio. I'll probably do a repeat of that scenario as well just for fun.

Wow. Lotta text. If you manage to read this far, I owe you a special request chapter, my friend XD Just let me know what you'd like to see, and I'll give it a shot. Hope I answered your questions in a way that makes sense, cuz sometimes I don't even understand me.

Isatis on August 31, 2016, 12:36:13 PM

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IsatisI am still here and I did read the whole thing. Looking forward to that special chap.  Kai kept his mother's older self safe, he'll probably gauze the measure of Devon. Considering the guy got young Farah out of slavery and kept her in relative safety, that should earn him brownie points.

You have a good point. Amon has his own issue to handle, he deals with Laquadiah and whatever  serpent entity she may be attached to along with locating Altum. How will you handle Osira in this game? With her return to Egypt, what will be the context of her actions towards Laquadiah? Telling her she's a wannabe who wants her brothers affections and instilling jealousy into her as Laquadiah rages at how close Amon and Osira are? Could drive the priestess nuts. I see Osira as being the one who will gauge whether there's anything to happen between her and Amon.

Valencia and Masquerade? Duel of the assassin's; and yes the answers made sense.

That makes Older Farah and Amon part of the diplomatic envoy right? So, for the most part, w from whose perspective will you start the Origin section of the story?

LordHigurashi on August 31, 2016, 1:31:50 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, let me know what you wanna see, and I'll see where I can put it. Yeah, Amon will probably measure Devon's worth as an ally against Kai, and since I'll be portraying Devon as the wolfman option, expect him to be fiercely protective of Young Farah once they get close. There will, again, be some butting of heads between Amon and Devon, but that's just what guys do, especially alpha males. They'll be rivals at worst, maybe friends depending on how I handle Amon's first encounter with his mother's younger self.

Ever since I first finished Episode 1, that snake Laquadia keeps around seemed fishy, like he's gonna turn out to BE the Serpent God and that he's been using Laquadia like a puppet. I knew my redemption plot for Osira would affect the Origin plot, but I THINK I can do the same thing I did for LoQO2 and have Osira sabotage the OTHER villains from within. Like you said, sowing seeds of jealousy and trying to lure Laquadia into an encounter with Amon while simultaneously making her question where she stands with Crayden to make her more receptive to Amon's charm. I think Osira's the only one who could successfully turn Laquadia against her self-absorbed brother AND make her curious about what Amon could provide, while remaining objective about her compatibility with Amon and not just trying to get another curvy bitch for her brother's harem. I feel like it would also help reignite those instincts of an elder sister in Osira, as she would want to be sure Laquadia wouldn't turn to THEIR side only to become a knife in the back later on.

... That's actually a better idea than ANYTHING I might've already had in mind XD A fight between Valencio and Masquerade would have some potential, though I don't see a JakexTirah happening with them, given Valencio's personality. If you like, we can collaborate on that XD

That is correct. Since there's an implied alliance treaty between Egypt and Namaria, as Opala and Farah are in the Beldorian Empire as representatives of Namaria, it would make sense for Amon to attend as well. That being said, Devon will be the primary perspective focus until he and his party meet Mature Farah (I refuse to call her old in ANY capacity) in that one town I always get confused with the house you can buy in Whiterun in Skyrim. However, there will be a VERY special supporting character that ISN'T in the game at all helping Devon right from the start. I won't spoil anything, but this character HAS been seen with the Royal Family before.

Isatis on August 31, 2016, 2:04:25 PM

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IsatisSpecial chap request? Cool. All at once. Granted, Naluna would probably be skittish but Amon taking care of all of them at once? True test. Leave nothing to doubt. Sorry to say this, but exclude Sebastillon . I don't think Naluna ready just yet.

Heh, Wolfman as a protector. That's cool. Glad that you like the Osira plot line. Forgot about the protection time older sister angle. Would totally read that. 

As for Laquadiah's snake. Could totally see that happening. Instead of a  massive and imposing dragon you nearly have to fight, the Serpent god goes around his prospective servant's neck and body. He's still a cobra but you woukdnt think it's some supreme being hanging arpund in the lower world. Laquadiah would have no idea what she's toting around. 
As for the mystery character, I'll go back and check. May come to my own conclusion about who it is.
Nah, didn't expect a thing happening between Masquerade and Valencio. Considering their professions, we'd be dealing with a mister and miss smith scenario without the romantic resolution seen in the movie. They'd probably hear of each other's prowess and decide it ain't big enough for the two of them.

Aside from that, I've got nothing. Looking forward to the next chap!

LordHigurashi on August 31, 2016, 2:22:39 PM

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LordHigurashiConsider it done.

And that was actually a hard decision for me, as I prefer the art in the Eastern Edition, but I thought taking the Beastman route would make for a better story, especially since Kai never really got to showoff any Neverus Tribe skill and Jake was a ho-hum human. At least ONE of the player characters should be on Amon's level when it comes time to throw down. Thankfully, Origin gave me the option to make that happen.

That snake has always seemed fishy to me. There's something not quite right about it, and I feel like it's going to wind up being REALLY important down the line. I mean, the expression 'a snake in the grass' DOES describe something hiding in plain sight, so I wouldn't be surprised if that cobra DOES turn out to be the Serpent God and has been controlling Laquadia like a puppet, whether she realizes it or not.

Good luck trying to figure out the mystery character. The answer may surprise you.

Yeah, Valencio's too serious and Masquerade is too playful. I feel like they'd sooner drive each other completely insane than try to bang XD

As always, I appreciate the feedback; Makes all the time I divert from my ACTUAL job as a YouTuber to do this worth it.

trilljacker6534 on August 27, 2016, 10:46:55 PM

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trilljacker6534He does make me wish I was him.

LordHigurashi on August 27, 2016, 11:01:00 PM

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LordHigurashiTell me about it. It kinda sucks being envious of your own creation

trilljacker6534 on August 21, 2016, 9:24:30 AM

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trilljacker6534Now he has satisfy his family, he will move on to Naluna.

LordHigurashi on August 21, 2016, 9:25:56 AM

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LordHigurashiMove on? You make it sound like he's gonna give them up XD

trilljacker6534 on August 20, 2016, 5:52:09 AM

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trilljacker6534I always love Osira sex scenes.

LordHigurashi on August 20, 2016, 7:21:49 AM

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LordHigurashiNoted for future reference

Isatis on August 18, 2016, 4:54:36 AM

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Isatis*Grin* Worth the wait, and about time lol. Farah's in story reaction is pretty much what I expected. To not indulge even a tiny but with anyone else revved her up with Amon something fierce. Wonder if what I think will happen will happen. 

LordHigurashi on August 18, 2016, 4:58:26 AM

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LordHigurashiXD Glad it was to your liking. Been working on this one since I got out of the hospital, partially for the sake of my pleasing my readers and partially as a form of therapy, so this chapter was as much for me as it was for the rewrite XD

trilljacker6534 on August 14, 2016, 6:22:13 PM

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trilljacker6534Jake is the new CS now and Amon is about to have another go at his family again.

LordHigurashi on August 14, 2016, 6:27:42 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, you have to admit, Jake WOULD be the best replacement for Seth. Just seemed right to promote him. And yes, the next 4 chapters are going to be VERY fun to write. I was... delayed by some personal matters, but I can finally put the serious away for a bit and throw a few chapters of pure smut in here. As for my 100th chapter, Amon's partner will be someone VERY special...

trilljacker6534 on August 8, 2016, 2:59:30 AM

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trilljacker6534Knew Amon would kick his ass and I am shock to see you kill off Seth like that.

LordHigurashi on August 8, 2016, 4:59:23 AM

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LordHigurashiWell, against Eclipse, that was closer to a fair fight, given his reputation. As for Seth, are you REALLY shocked by how that went down after I already had Opala of all people impaled? Plus, he DID commit high treason and in most civilizations, that's punishable by death. Seth honestly had it coming

Isatis on August 6, 2016, 7:57:33 AM

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IsatisDamn it, I was right. And the cliffhanger? You're one a roll today.

LordHigurashi on August 6, 2016, 11:58:53 AM

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LordHigurashiThanks. I've had a lot of inspiration lately, so chalk it up to that

trilljacker6534 on August 6, 2016, 9:29:07 AM

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trilljacker6534Amon is about to teach Eclipse a real lesson... A lesson of pain.

LordHigurashi on August 6, 2016, 11:57:46 AM

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LordHigurashiXD

Isatis on August 6, 2016, 2:57:10 AM

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IsatisTruly happy? This makes no sense. I'd consider pulling Osira back from the dark side a momentous occasion considering going it must have been a while since she originally left Egypt. Why is he truly happy *now*?

LordHigurashi on August 6, 2016, 3:02:04 AM

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LordHigurashi-shrug- Honestly, I dunno what I was thinking there. I finished that chapter in an all-nighter, and I agonized over the ending when I finally said 'Fuck it, make it corny. Don't even care if it makes sense or not'. I was tired, and I wanted to go to bed XD Kinda right back there now, honestly, but I REALLY wanna finish the second game's storyline before I reach the 100th chapter special. YOU are gonna love it, I can already guarantee that. I will say nothing more about it at this time, though

Isatis on August 6, 2016, 3:03:54 AM

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Isatis*Heh* Alright, chapter 100 it is then. Will wait.

LordHigurashi on August 6, 2016, 3:08:59 AM

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LordHigurashiAssuming I can improvise my way through the final fight with Altum, I should have a few extra chapters to spare before the big 100

Isatis on August 6, 2016, 3:13:00 AM

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IsatisAny chance of saving the angry twin? Tsuntsun and deredere. Angry and nice. Though, while Naluna is fine with moving to Egypt, why do I get the feeling Altus may just decline? Would the failure to help her affect the heroes much? Ending up as breeding stock for bugs? Not cool.

LordHigurashi on August 6, 2016, 3:21:12 AM

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LordHigurashiNot likely. At least not until the events of Origin, as it seems VERY probable that Altum's the one who dragged Farah's past self into the present-day. A woman in black armor who looks at her with unspoken hatred? Sounds like Altum to me. But I've only played the first chapter of Origin, so I don't really know how involved Altum is gonna be in those events. Pretty much once I decided to redeem Osira, I was heading into uncharted territory, and at this point, I'm at the mercy of my muses XD

Isatis on August 6, 2016, 2:23:01 AM

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IsatisLemme guess: Horse dude showed up. That guy is annoying to fight. With
 How they're exhausted, he might just win this one. Hopefully, it's not him and nobody gets kidnapped.

LordHigurashi on August 6, 2016, 2:48:55 AM

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LordHigurashiNever underestimate the Mortal God's willpower and resolve. Even half dead he'd still be one tough S.O.B

trilljacker6534 on August 5, 2016, 6:11:23 AM

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trilljacker6534Looks like everyone is getting what they want now.

LordHigurashi on August 5, 2016, 7:53:06 AM

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LordHigurashiYup, things are starting to wrap up in Namaria, then I'll be taking a bit of a break until Origin is done. It'll mostly be pure smut in the interim

Isatis on August 6, 2016, 2:25:51 AM

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IsatisWill we finally get the Amon/Farah lemon? You covered Opala, Naluna,Osira by now. I mean, he got the late Pharaoh's approval so why not?

LordHigurashi on August 6, 2016, 2:46:53 AM

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LordHigurashiTechnically, Amon fucked Altum XD I know they're the same person, but my Naluna IS a different personality, so you can count her as a separate entity. As for the long-awaited mother-son payoff, I'm afraid you'll have to wait a bit longer. Don't worry, though. It's coming, and I'm gonna be doing something special for the 100th chapter. That's why I skipped Kross entirely and will be SERIOUSLY rewriting the second game's events between here and the last round with Altum. I'm basically trying to wrap up all the seriousness so I can go back to some more light-hearted smutty stuff while Gabe is finishing Origin.

trilljacker6534 on July 21, 2016, 10:02:32 PM

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trilljacker6534Next up they all going after Atlum next.

LordHigurashi on July 21, 2016, 10:06:33 PM

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LordHigurashiNot quite. Kross still needs to pay for his betrayal, and Seth needs a good talking-to if he wants to keep his head

trilljacker6534 on July 17, 2016, 7:31:37 PM

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trilljacker6534way to end it off on a cliffhanger and she better not miss.

LordHigurashi on July 21, 2016, 10:04:31 PM

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LordHigurashiOh, Milana always hits her mark when she wants to

trilljacker6534 on July 3, 2016, 2:12:39 PM

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trilljacker6534Time to call in the falcon and one thing is will they fight Eclipse the Horseman?

LordHigurashi on July 3, 2016, 5:36:36 PM

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LordHigurashiI hadn't considered it

trilljacker6534 on July 3, 2016, 5:49:27 PM

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trilljacker6534well I was asking because that guy is tough to beat and I hate that he said he only got a scratch

LordHigurashi on July 3, 2016, 6:11:05 PM

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LordHigurashiWell that certainly won't do. I think I can put him in Amon's way

trilljacker6534 on July 3, 2016, 8:09:53 PM

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trilljacker6534Yeah I want to see Amon destroy him or beat fairly

trilljacker6534 on June 18, 2016, 11:19:54 PM

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trilljacker6534When the time come for them to fight Kai, will they be at equal strength him and Amon.

LordHigurashi on June 19, 2016, 5:14:13 AM

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LordHigurashiOh, the Royal Family won't be getting involved in the fight against Bastorahl. It isn't their place

trilljacker6534 on June 11, 2016, 9:34:15 PM

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trilljacker6534They must have the most powerful weapons then.

LordHigurashi on June 11, 2016, 9:42:39 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, individually, they are still less than the Blade of Nabonaga itself, but they'll be plenty to contend with Altum's full-onyx armor and Bastorahl's power. The fight for Namaria WILL ultimately be in the hands of Kai and the others FROM Namaria, while the Royal Family play a more supportive role, as Namaria isn't their territory and it's not THEIR duty to fight for it

trilljacker6534 on June 1, 2016, 5:47:03 AM

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trilljacker6534Yeah it been a long time since Jake and the others escape and I wonder how he is doing.

LordHigurashi on June 2, 2016, 2:54:58 PM

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LordHigurashiMostly trying to rebuild. Thebes suffered a lot of damage during the coup and Seth's attempt to retake the palace.

Isatis on May 30, 2016, 5:33:36 PM

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IsatisOne thing I've always wanted to ask. We've had scenes where Amon had sex (and I do mean penetration and all) with Osira, Lanula, and Osira but he has yet to do the same with Farah. Any reason why?

LordHigurashi on May 30, 2016, 9:54:13 PM

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LordHigurashi... That is actually a really damn good question. Quite honestly, I dunno why I haven't done a hardcore scene with Farah yet. If I had to guess though, I think it's cuz mama's gonna steal the show when I finally start in on Origin and I don't wanna overexpose her, so to speak. Frankly, I'm just happy people are reading this at all, let alone paying attention to who ISN'T getting fucked

Isatis on May 31, 2016, 5:09:14 AM

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IsatisWeird isn't it? One hardcore scene would be enough. Though, I don't see how Farah would steal the show in Origin. It's incomplete and at most there are two scenes with her in that game. The tent and the inn. However, It's your own take on things so you may end up adding more scenes. Looking forward to it.

LordHigurashi on May 31, 2016, 7:25:25 AM

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LordHigurashiKeep in mind, my story is a kind of 'what-if' scenario, with Amon's very existence changing the way things work. Dunno if you've noticed, but I've kinda been cock-blocking the actual player characters from the games so far, and Devon isn't likely to be an exception to this. Though, depending on my mood when the time comes, that might change, at least until the two men meet. But that's still a ways off, and I still haven't finished LOQO2 yet, so anything can happen. Only way to find out is to keep reading XD

Isatis on May 31, 2016, 8:18:46 AM

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IsatisConsidering both Jake and Kai happen to have respective others that Swegabe doesn't let the player get together with? I don't see it as much of a cock block. As for reading more? I'm still waiting game for more.oved how you handled Naluna. So, the one Amon had sex with is the one who tossed them off the cliff while the nice one you encounter a chapter ago is the kind version not connected with the one in the armor. That part was always confusing even in game. Why not kill the player when she had the chance instead of healing their wounds?

LordHigurashi on May 31, 2016, 2:04:17 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, Kai and Milana don't really have a relationship beyond being close friends, since Milana turned lesbian after she was with Richter, and I don't know what Jake's deal was, though I always thought he and Tirah would be a cute couple, which is why I made them a thing in my version. And I'm not sure exactly what Naluna's deal is, since I've actually never finished the second game to get the ending, but for what I wanted to do, I basically gave Naluna a REALLY extreme case of split personality disorder and split her into two separate identities: Herself and the one who became Altum. I just hope my explanation for the split made enough sense to not feel forced.

Isatis on May 31, 2016, 2:11:42 PM

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IsatisNah, it made sense to me. You could have always gone with the evil twin route. It'd have been believable. The more proactive twin wanted to something about their tribes situation while the calmer twin (the nurse) proposed peaceful means despite their circumstances.  Forgot that detail about Milana, she does get passed when you kiss her at the beginning. As for Torah, that works for Jake I guess.

LordHigurashi on May 31, 2016, 2:49:47 PM

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LordHigurashiThe 'soul split' felt plausible, especially since the Neverus never really die permanently, so I thought a strong ethical conflict might be enough to split a Neverus into separate entities. And Tirah DOES show up alongside Jake when you open the Anthro realm by finding all the crystals, so it's possible they have a relationship canonically anyway. And not to spoil anything, but Amon's going to have a very unique effect on Laquadia when I get to Origin

Isatis on May 31, 2016, 3:50:11 PM

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IsatisDamn autocar rectangular. Messed the names up. Laquadiah? Isn't she fixated on her brother? What effect would Amon have on her? With Farah on Amongst side, I suppose she gets spared the lizard men gangland? And stop baiting me lol. I'm already looking forward to the Origin story but you aren't done with this one yet. Many more scenes to cover.

Isatis on May 31, 2016, 3:51:19 PM

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IsatisMy phone's auto correct keeps messing some of my words up. 

Isatis on May 31, 2016, 3:53:32 PM

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IsatisOne more thing, which Farah steals the show? The teen Farah or the elder Farah. Would be hilarious if Devon loses both to Amon.

LordHigurashi on May 31, 2016, 4:02:08 PM

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LordHigurashiThink about it. It's pretty obvious when you consider certain factors like Amon's relationship with his own sisters, and how Craden responds to Laquadia's devotion. As for Farah stealing the show, mostly Young Farah, as she's a central character this time around. And naturally, Devon will lose XD Amon doesn't like to share his women except with each other. Though MY Devon is gonna be one of the Beastmen, so they're likely to butt heads over Young Farah more than once

Isatis on May 31, 2016, 4:26:04 PM

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IsatisThe angle was staring me right in the face and I didn't notice it. Good plan. One brother doesn't give her the time of day. The other gives the time of day to his loved ones. Lol and behold, he has his own powerful and diabolical sister (not that Laquadiah knows that Farah has mellowed at Amon side). Though you said Beastman Devon will button heads with Amon, isn't it more likely of young Farah that she shares them both rather than see them fight? Devon does have the option of turning her down.

LordHigurashi on May 31, 2016, 5:23:01 PM

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LordHigurashiWay to follow the breadcrumbs. Craden's disinterest will turn his sister against him, and push her straight into the arms of a man who understands her needs and will be more than willing to see they are met. As for Beastman Devon, he may be the only one of the guys who can be Amon's equal. His physical prowess will certainly be on par, and his bestial instincts would spur him to fight for a desired mate. They're bound to come to blows at least once, as is expected with two alpha males who share interest in a female. Whether or not it'll be a one-time fight for dominance is really up to how the game goes after Episode 1, which is as far as I've played so far

Isatis on May 31, 2016, 6:04:51 PM

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IsatisI had time, was bored and played all three. Interesting events up ahead. Amon has Opala, Farah, Osiris to keep happy and content. Is he sure he can take his present mother and younger mother combined libido? In addition to Laquadiah's? Would be funny to find out in universe.

LordHigurashi on May 31, 2016, 9:41:03 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, as I am totally broke (Youtube isn't exactly a get-rich-quick career), I can't support Gabe on Patreon, so I don't have access to the betas she releases every couple weeks. And you forget, Amon is no ordinary man. He is the Mortal God, and he could hardly be fitting of that reputation if there existed a woman he couldn't handle. He is, after all, Farah's son. He has a legacy to live up to, and it's on him to see that the royal blood passes on to a new generation

trilljacker6534 on May 24, 2016, 6:56:34 AM

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trilljacker6534Now she get powers like her brother now, great.

LordHigurashi on May 24, 2016, 7:33:33 AM

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LordHigurashiWell, she IS Egypt's queen. If the pharaoh was believed to be a god in mortal form, why not his wife and sister?

trilljacker6534 on May 19, 2016, 5:31:11 PM

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trilljacker6534I can't believe that she is spilt in two but if they was to kill her bitch half would it return to her or would she be kill?

LordHigurashi on May 19, 2016, 7:56:24 PM

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LordHigurashiDunno yet. I've actually never finish LoQO2, so I don't know the full story on Naluna. But since this is just my rewrite of the story, I wanted to keep the helpful Naluna in the picture in addition to Altum, so I took a page from the Shadow of Revan and made Naluna conflicted about her feelings towards humans, resulting in an extreme case of split-personality disorder, becoming two separate entities with opposite personalities.

trilljacker6534 on May 13, 2016, 1:45:18 PM

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trilljacker6534Nice change of pace and I like how she took the form of Bastet.

LordHigurashi on May 13, 2016, 3:34:58 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, why leave the Queen out of the transforming fun? Besides, Bastet seemed like the logical choice, cuz of Sebastilion

trilljacker6534 on May 10, 2016, 7:20:20 AM

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trilljacker6534Opala no. That fight was great but the was real shocking right there at the end.

LordHigurashi on May 10, 2016, 9:09:58 AM

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LordHigurashiThat was the point

trilljacker6534 on May 8, 2016, 6:45:09 AM

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trilljacker6534Well looks like it's round 2 against Altum begins now

LordHigurashi on May 8, 2016, 10:08:25 AM

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LordHigurashiYup. Next round, ding ding ding!

trilljacker6534 on May 5, 2016, 8:37:30 PM

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trilljacker6534He finally tame the dream demon and glad to see her again.

LordHigurashi on May 5, 2016, 10:00:15 PM

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LordHigurashiFunny thing is, I had an entirely different chapter in mind when I started, but then I remembered that I haven't had a chapter with Naacia since before the Tower of Hades, and I felt she was overdo. And Amon JUST went to sleep, so I put off my INTENDED chapter for the sake of bringing back the Dream Haunter. The next chapter will see the group return to Sanctus, and Round 3 with the Dark Knight, but Naacia will be getting her own arc off and on as she becomes more accepting of being Amon's pet

trilljacker6534 on May 1, 2016, 8:19:21 AM

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trilljacker6534good to see it up and running again and like the stories they told each other.

LordHigurashi on May 1, 2016, 8:52:04 AM

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LordHigurashiYeah, I'm sorry about the delay between chapters, on ALL my works, but I've been diverting more time to my work as a Youtuber, so I haven't had as much time to play LOQO2 in any kind of recreational capacity lately. I also felt like I owed it to Osira's redemption in MY version to give her and Amon some meaningful alone time with Opala and Farah sharing his attention. Osira's been through some rough shit. She's earned her own time, I'd say.

trilljacker6534 on March 22, 2016, 7:02:14 AM

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trilljacker6534Now they have an assassin on their team but what about the one that is now living in Kai house?

LordHigurashi on March 22, 2016, 7:17:41 AM

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LordHigurashiIf I was gonna include all party members that aren't incompatible in one run, I'd have to go back to Valethorn and get Iliona because of her mass-poison. On that note, I DO regret not saying 'No' to Layla in favor of Latex, but I think that would've been more to just write more shenanigans with Amon, or throw Farah in some lesbian stuff with her

trilljacker6534 on March 22, 2016, 7:31:41 AM

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trilljacker6534Yeah and I think it was kind of hinted that latex had a thing for Gin'yen

LordHigurashi on March 22, 2016, 3:15:57 PM

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LordHigurashiPfft XD Gin'Yen's a man of the cloth. He'd never say yes to Latex XD I do like the implied lesbianism between Lilith and Milana, which I base entirely on the fact that Milana teases her in like, every other dialogue scene between them. That's something Gabe's been doing so much better; The character interactions. Gabrielle and Kythe are the cutest couple in the series, though XD No contest

trilljacker6534 on March 17, 2016, 7:19:48 AM

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trilljacker6534Amon wins, Fatality, Flawless victory.

LordHigurashi on March 17, 2016, 7:21:26 AM

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LordHigurashiXD I wouldn't say flawless. His family did get raped a bit before he flipped his shit, and Kross DID get away

trilljacker6534 on March 16, 2016, 8:22:22 PM

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trilljacker6534Now they have to make another long journey back and which side will Valencio be on?

LordHigurashi on March 16, 2016, 9:01:21 PM

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LordHigurashiAll things in their time

trilljacker6534 on March 15, 2016, 10:09:02 PM

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trilljacker6534At first I thought you was going to do the fight in a later chapter but glad to added it in this one.

LordHigurashi on March 15, 2016, 10:20:52 PM

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LordHigurashiI've been stuck on that part of the game for almost 2 weeks while I worked on the last 3 chapters. I needed to wrap the 'at sea' stuff for the sake of my sanity and the desire to progress. Plus, I figured I could use it as a way to further Osira's redemption

trilljacker6534 on March 13, 2016, 2:34:14 PM

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trilljacker6534I hate Rughart so much, can't wait to see him die.

LordHigurashi on March 13, 2016, 3:10:22 PM

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LordHigurashiOh, he'll die. And someone very special will deal the final blow

Ultrasound7 on March 4, 2016, 2:28:17 AM

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Ultrasound7I wonder when He'll get to the part where he makes a son to take his place?

LordHigurashi on March 4, 2016, 9:23:03 AM

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LordHigurashiHey, Amon's only in his early twenties XD He's not going to the Hall of Judgement for quite some time. But there WILL be an heir at some point. Might make that a thing in my rewrite of Origin, assuming the timing makes such a thing possible

trilljacker6534 on March 2, 2016, 10:41:14 AM

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trilljacker6534I wonder if they will meet up with the weak sea monster and then the real one appear out of nowhere

LordHigurashi on March 2, 2016, 11:04:20 AM

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LordHigurashiMaybe they will, maybe they won't. I've never done an ocean-based combat scene before, so it could be fun. I AM still trying to figure out a situation where it'd be appropriate for Amon to tap into the power of the gods in a more drastic way, as well as how I'm gonna handle the bit with the Neverus Tribe. I'm just glad I don't have to write that threesome scene between Kross, Rughart, and Osira... Even in the context of the original plot, I hate reading that sequence

trilljacker6534 on February 21, 2016, 7:38:19 PM

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trilljacker6534well  looks like they about to leave the continent and finally kill that bastard rughart

LordHigurashi on February 21, 2016, 7:40:54 PM

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LordHigurashiYeah, and Nabonaga's not gonna be the one to do it this time >:D

trilljacker6534 on February 17, 2016, 6:41:12 AM

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trilljacker6534They sat back and just watch him have sex, thought they would have a orgy by now.

LordHigurashi on February 17, 2016, 7:29:09 AM

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LordHigurashiMaybe later. That was more for the sake of Amon relieving frustration due to Kai being stubborn. Might let Kai and Milana have some fun later if I can figure out a time to work it in

trilljacker6534 on February 12, 2016, 8:22:28 PM

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trilljacker6534I did not see that coming with Tirah kicking Seth ass like that and I thought Amon would try and reform him someway.

LordHigurashi on February 12, 2016, 8:42:54 PM

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LordHigurashiYeah, that'll happen while Amon's royal ass is in another dimension. Sure XD Nah, in all seriousness, I wrote it this way more to give the characters from the FIRST game something to do while the Royal Family is in Namaria with the plot. I figured, since Seth went back Egypt after checking on the artifacts, why not have him try to retake the capitol since Osira never told him about her real objectives? That way, I can still write in the really awesome speech by Opala when they get a chance to go back to Egypt. That is, if I can work around the corners I seem to have written myself into in some areas because of Osira's redemption

trilljacker6534 on February 3, 2016, 7:34:55 AM

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trilljacker6534Kai better not let those artifacts consume him.

LordHigurashi on February 12, 2016, 8:38:19 PM

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LordHigurashiIt'll be tricky. Power corrupts, and Kai's not used to handling it yet. He's only as strong as his will at this point

(Sorry for late response, Foundry wasn't showing the comment)

trilljacker6534 on January 14, 2016, 8:22:23 AM

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trilljacker6534That was an great fight and can't wait to see what you have planned.

LordHigurashi on January 14, 2016, 9:34:33 AM

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LordHigurashiGlad you liked it. Ever since Amon found out Altum's true identity, I had been planning to bring back the Dark Knight for a betrayal, based on events LATER in the game. The timing isn't the same, but only cuz I nearly wrote myself into a corner with the whole 'redemption' bit for Osira, so I've had to adjust the pacing of events, as well as cutting out some events entirely. That being said, considering the Temple of Sun section of the game would be entirely conflict free in my version of the events, I'm leaving it out and will be proceeding straight to the Northern Lands portion.

trilljacker6534 on January 5, 2016, 8:18:54 PM

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trilljacker6534That was a brutality type death for ricther and it was great to see him gone.

LordHigurashi on January 5, 2016, 8:31:05 PM

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LordHigurashiMilana said it best: The prick deserved it. Though, I do seem to have written myself into a corner when it comes time for a certain betrayal...

trilljacker6534 on January 1, 2016, 2:37:27 PM

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trilljacker6534They better get ready for what coming.

LordHigurashi on January 1, 2016, 2:39:40 PM

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LordHigurashiHeheh. I think the better suggestion would be for YOU to get ready for what's coming. They might not be running into who you think...

trilljacker6534 on December 30, 2015, 8:53:57 PM

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trilljacker6534If Valencio was to die in your story you should give him a repectable death because he is one of the Villains I like in the game series.

LordHigurashi on December 30, 2015, 9:04:31 PM

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LordHigurashiYeah, he's a contract killer, but actually seems genuinely loyal to Osira. I do have to admire him for that, if nothing else. Hell, if I can find a way to do it without seeming forced, I might have him stick around. Sadly, there WILL be a significant betrayal in the future, but it's necessary if I want to do Origin when Gabe finally finishes it. I have so many ideas in mind for that part of the story that I don't even know where to begin XD Gotta love temporal magic and a space-time continuum is lenient enough NOT to implode on itself when a woman meets her younger self in another dimension XD

trilljacker6534 on December 25, 2015, 12:16:07 AM

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trilljacker6534well they better have a fool proof plan to save them and Happy Holidays.

LordHigurashi on December 30, 2015, 8:57:32 PM

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LordHigurashiPlan, yes. Foolproof? -shrug- Not sure. And happy holidays to you too. Sorry for the late response, I wasn't able to see this comment until just now for some reason

trilljacker6534 on November 22, 2015, 9:05:02 AM

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trilljacker6534good thing they made it their in time or else they would have come in and saw he being rape by minotaurs.

LordHigurashi on November 22, 2015, 9:12:04 AM

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LordHigurashiTrue enough, but things could still go wrong down the line. but, all things in their proper time...

trilljacker6534 on October 25, 2015, 3:50:17 PM

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trilljacker6534I did not see that coming with Kai and Amon meeting up like that and Kai should put the gauntlet on for show.

LordHigurashi on October 25, 2015, 10:43:17 PM

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LordHigurashiNeither did Kai, Farah, or any of the others for that matter XD Of course, the matriarch was the happiest one to see him, but she IS his mother so that's understandable. As for the gauntlet, I'm not sure how I should handle that for my version, what with Amon undermining Bastorahl's plans as much as he can without getting caught. That's why I'm taking a break for a while to think and finish perfecting the first episode of Origin. Not to mention, making some money so I can move out of my parents' house

trilljacker6534 on October 22, 2015, 8:17:52 PM

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trilljacker6534They almost had him but didn't and I see you added his poison blade move.

LordHigurashi on October 22, 2015, 8:21:10 PM

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LordHigurashiYeah, I thought it'd be enough to put Valencio entirely on the defensive, giving him serious risks to worry about in close-quarters AND long-range combat. Milana's magic bullets STING, and Kai's poison is no joke XD

trilljacker6534 on October 21, 2015, 10:42:00 PM

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trilljacker6534I think Bastorahl know the phrase "keep your enemies closer" and I bet he was thinking after amon left he will have his way with osira.

LordHigurashi on October 22, 2015, 7:20:51 AM

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LordHigurashiMy original idea, before I decided to do the whole 'Amon plays the villain' shtick, was to duplicate the scene from the game, only with Amon restrained and forced to watch. But you're right. Bastorahl's no fool. As for whether or not I intend to follow the 'rebirth of Bastorahl' idea from the game, I'm not sure cuz I kinda have this thing in mind with Altum/Naluna. But, we'll cross that bridge when we come to it

trilljacker6534 on October 20, 2015, 8:39:10 PM

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trilljacker6534So who will join them layla or someone else.

LordHigurashi on October 20, 2015, 8:51:30 PM

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LordHigurashiLayla, since the others are acquired outside the central quest. Granted, I prefer Latex for obvious reasons, but she's introduced via side-questing thus does not count in my rewrite. I had a similar policy regarding Jake's group from the first game, keeping only the members I used often as part of the storyline

trilljacker6534 on October 20, 2015, 11:44:49 AM

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trilljacker6534Kai attitude was justify for all they been through.

LordHigurashi on October 20, 2015, 11:53:55 AM

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LordHigurashiAnd Caldor and Layla understand that. Doesn't really excuse it, though. Still, Things are only just starting to get rough for Kai and his friends, and Amon and Osira's little masquerade won't last forever. Sooner or later, all hell is gonna break loose if they can't wrap this up quickly

trilljacker6534 on October 20, 2015, 6:42:43 AM

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trilljacker6534I always chose gin'yen to join my group.

LordHigurashi on October 20, 2015, 6:45:27 AM

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LordHigurashiSame here. He's the only healer I remember, aside from Zhu'Yen in the beginning.

trilljacker6534 on October 18, 2015, 9:16:05 PM

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trilljacker6534What they don't know is that she is safe and sound now.

LordHigurashi on October 19, 2015, 1:25:09 AM

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LordHigurashiOh, I'd say Farah's pretty confident in Opala's safety, knowing that if Osira's in Namaria, Amon must be, too. And I do believe you'll enjoy MY take on how her captivity will be spent. But, all things in due time...

trilljacker6534 on October 18, 2015, 7:40:08 AM

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trilljacker6534That is unexpected and it is funny to see lord kross coward in fear.

LordHigurashi on October 18, 2015, 7:49:14 AM

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LordHigurashiUnexpected, but only so to people who don't know Amon XD Plus, with his strength fully restored by... recent events... Even Emperor Bastorahl himself would have a hard time taking him down. And Valencio and Rüghart? They won't even be able to land a finger on him now that he's done playing possum. And with the Dark Knight Altum now on his side, Amon is all but invincible. That is, so long as his and Osira's true motives remain unknown...

trilljacker6534 on October 17, 2015, 8:18:19 PM

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trilljacker6534Opala and Farah knows how to fend for themselves but what happens next they will not see it coming.

LordHigurashi on October 17, 2015, 8:52:21 PM

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LordHigurashiYeah, no one did. Some surprises are good. That particular surprise isn't one of the good ones. I certainly don't approve. But keep in mind that my version of the events is radically different beneath the surface. Things aren't always what they seem out in the open... -wink-

trilljacker6534 on October 16, 2015, 6:29:25 PM

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trilljacker6534That was a nice talk farah with kai.

LordHigurashi on October 16, 2015, 6:59:53 PM

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LordHigurashiYeah, I wanted to work in one of the extra 'relationship' scenes since the first one with Farah triggers in an inn, but, as you've probably guessed, I'm pretty biased about who the women of the Royal Family take sexual interest in when it comes to MY version of the events XD Amon don't share, with one (maybe two, depending on Origin) exception: Sebastillion. I initially was gonna have her come to Kai after a nightmare about Amon and Opala, but, after the last chapter, I thought that would be too dark and depressing, so I had herhave a heart-to-heart with Kai as a way she could cope with how much she misses her son.

As I've said before, all the detailed stuff I'm kind of making up as I go, since my version changes Gabe's original timeline to a MAJOR extent, so I'm just hoping I don't wind up writing myself into a corner XD Though, if my theories about Origin are correct, based on Episode 1, THAT is gonna be fun to work with. I've been so inspired by it that I can't stop myself from writing. Now, if I can just find a way to make money off this project, with Gabe's permission and approval, naturally, I wouldn't have to worry about all the time I'm diverting from my OTHER job

trilljacker6534 on October 16, 2015, 10:50:24 AM

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trilljacker6534Man Amon is making me jealous now. I wish I was him.

LordHigurashi on October 16, 2015, 11:20:42 AM

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LordHigurashiXD Yeah, you're not the first. Men wanna be him, women just want him. Truly, it's good to be the king.

But, after playing through the first Episode of Origin at long last, I've been struck by an overload of inspiration, and I NEEDED to get this chapter up to make up for the 2 days of binging on the game XD. I have so many plans for Part 3 of this rewrite, covering Origin, and this is just one of the more immediate and long-term ones across the rest of my version from this point on: More scenes focusing on Osira alongside Amon's 'captivity' and how the reunion will affect her on a mental and emotional level. But enjoy the more pleasant bits while they last. One more light-hearted chapter is in the works before shit REALLY hits the fan.

On a lighter note, I expect to make Osira and Naluna Amon's harem wives alongside Opala. But, of course, that depends on how things go and what my muses whisper to me. Either way, enjoy the fun stuff while you can, and prepare for things to kick into high gear in the near future.

trilljacker6534 on October 13, 2015, 9:19:11 PM

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trilljacker6534Now that is how to retake a capital in a bloody way.

LordHigurashi on October 13, 2015, 9:23:12 PM

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LordHigurashiSwift and bloody is how I operate when it comes to retaking my home, so the characters I write have the same mentality :P

trilljacker6534 on October 13, 2015, 9:15:01 PM

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trilljacker6534Thought he was going to join them but oh well I can't wait to see the other characters appears

LordHigurashi on October 13, 2015, 9:22:14 PM

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LordHigurashiCome now, if I was THAT predictable, you'd know how this was going to end already XD

trilljacker6534 on October 13, 2015, 6:22:09 AM

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trilljacker6534They are about to see an old face reemerge.

LordHigurashi on October 13, 2015, 6:28:43 AM

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LordHigurashiYeah, that meeting has already taken place, but I decided to split the chapter since it was way longer than I like to stretch myself for one of these chapters for the sake of pacing. That being said, I will be posting Chapter 50 later today, as well as working on 51 through 53. Now, if I could just figure out away to monetize this little project so I can make some money from all the time I divert from making videos for youtube, I'll be set XD

trilljacker6534 on September 18, 2015, 9:30:25 PM

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trilljacker6534They made it just in time and will they run into that ghost ship or that crazy alchemist ?

LordHigurashi on September 18, 2015, 9:38:07 PM

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LordHigurashiDunno... I'm sorta taking creative liberties here since I'm making such drastic changes in my rewrite. But I don't remember the crazy alchemist or the haunted ship having any major connection to the main quest

trilljacker6534 on September 18, 2015, 9:41:30 PM

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trilljacker6534you are right but the alchemist does give kai his magic but it might not be needed.

LordHigurashi on September 18, 2015, 10:52:13 PM

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LordHigurashiI didn't mean it in that sense. I meant that I don't remember if the events tied to the alchemist and the ship wreck have anything to do with Osira and Bastorahl

trilljacker6534 on September 18, 2015, 12:28:23 PM

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trilljacker6534he finally got to hit that earlier than I expected.

LordHigurashi on September 18, 2015, 12:37:13 PM

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LordHigurashiSuch is the charm of Egypt's Mortal God, my friend XD But in all honesty, I just wanted to give rabid readers like YOU a little treat for all the support in the last year and a half. That's why I had Amon sexually conquering so early on.

trilljacker6534 on September 16, 2015, 10:13:48 AM

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trilljacker6534if things go south they can fight their way out.

LordHigurashi on September 16, 2015, 11:02:06 AM

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LordHigurashiThat's the idea. To be honest, I never liked this part of the game. And even though I want all the scenes, I've never gone out of my way for the one at the outpost. Farah's the type of mother I always wanted, so even though she's just one of Gabe's characters, I love her very much. Opala and Osira too. That's why I made Amon. To live through him in this story. Heh... Sounds kinda stupid when I type it out like this XD

trilljacker6534 on September 16, 2015, 3:37:17 PM

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trilljacker6534it's funny and not stupid in anyway.

LordHigurashi on September 16, 2015, 6:22:26 PM

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LordHigurashiIt's a LITTLE stupid... Getting so attached to a fictional character

trilljacker6534 on September 9, 2015, 2:24:34 PM

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trilljacker6534I can't wait tosee if amon will have a scene with here and when you kill rughart, make it slow and painful for that fat bastard.

LordHigurashi on September 9, 2015, 4:56:18 PM

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LordHigurashiI'm definitely going to try, but I think it's obvious what I'm setting up here XD I was hesitant to actually post Chapter 45 at all, to be honest, cuz I'm revealing Altum's true identity WAY earlier than the game did, so I was taking a risk the instant I started writing this chapter. However, I think the whole 'charming the enemy' thing I've set up here with Amon and Altum will make future chapters very interesting, as Altum will likely feel conflicted about her duties when weighed against her attraction to Amon.

As for Rughart, death will be neither quick nor painless for that fat fuck, as Egypt's Mortal God is NEVER forgiving nor merciful when dealing with those who would insult his family. I know I'm not...

trilljacker6534 on September 9, 2015, 6:33:56 PM

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trilljacker6534That is good to hear

LordHigurashi on September 9, 2015, 6:38:48 PM

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LordHigurashiRughart is going to know at LEAST 9 kinds of Hell before Amon even thinks of putting him out of his misery

trilljacker6534 on September 3, 2015, 8:19:32 PM

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trilljacker6534Hey will they visit that haunted ship if they get the chance and glad you choose the fight.

LordHigurashi on September 4, 2015, 6:14:09 AM

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LordHigurashiI almost always choose the fight cuz it gains you affection with Osira. Plus, having the option to resist the guards makes my little rewrite easier to do since Kai's logic and reason for fighting back makes total sense in my version. As for the haunted ship, I'm not sure if that'll be part of the story since I don't actually think it's important to the main plot

trilljacker6534 on August 20, 2015, 7:33:39 AM

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trilljacker6534yeah jailbreak time and I am glad they made it thourgh alive and never lost hope.

LordHigurashi on August 20, 2015, 8:23:27 AM

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LordHigurashiLike I was gonna kill off the original Heroes of Egypt XD But, yeah. They weren't gonna let themselves be trapped like rats for long. Not in the dungeon of their own home

trilljacker6534 on July 26, 2015, 6:52:39 PM

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trilljacker6534glad you added this calming chapter to all the action that taken place here.

LordHigurashi on July 26, 2015, 7:42:33 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, it can't always be Amon kicking ass. Or fucking ass when his family is concerned XD

trilljacker6534 on July 23, 2015, 7:25:36 AM

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trilljacker6534I am expecting amon to do some sort of awesome escape from that dungeon.

LordHigurashi on July 23, 2015, 8:06:02 AM

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LordHigurashiWell, considering Osira brought him to Namaria to save her from Bastorahl, Amon's plan is to play the part of the good prisoner until he gets his strength back and can get some support, namely Kai and the others. But since this is a rewrite fanfiction, I may be painting myself into a corner with this plot. So we'll cross that bridge if and when we come to it XD

trilljacker6534 on July 3, 2015, 6:06:21 AM

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trilljacker6534Now it truly begins

LordHigurashi on July 3, 2015, 7:03:26 AM

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LordHigurashiYeah, shit starts getting real from this point on. The first scene with Emperor Bastorahl, however, is gonna be... Well, if you remember what he did to Osira in his first appearance, it's gonna be MUCH worse in my version

trilljacker6534 on July 3, 2015, 6:22:29 PM

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trilljacker6534I can't wait to see what happens and where are the others.

LordHigurashi on July 3, 2015, 10:02:25 PM

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LordHigurashiJake and the other champions are in the palace dungeon in Egypt, and Osira is en route to Namaria with Amon in tow under the pretense of wanting to ad his cum to her diet. They'll get involved again soon.

trilljacker6534 on June 11, 2015, 11:09:52 AM

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trilljacker6534Looking good so far for act two.

LordHigurashi on June 11, 2015, 5:22:16 PM

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LordHigurashiOh, we've only begun to fight, as the saying goes XD

trilljacker6534 on June 9, 2015, 9:24:55 PM

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trilljacker6534I can't wait to see what else you have next.

LordHigurashi on June 9, 2015, 10:06:53 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, truth be told, Chapter 38 was just my intro for Chpater 39, but I made it a separate thing to make up for my recent inactivity. Chapter 39 is only going as far as the Hills of Sanctus cuz I've actually been trying to write it for the past month

trilljacker6534 on May 1, 2015, 5:44:25 AM

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trilljacker6534Looks like the stories is getting into the next part and also i was thinking if amon had a voice like how his sisters and mother was in the game, who would it be?

LordHigurashi on May 1, 2015, 6:38:54 AM

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LordHigurashiAmon's voice... Well, I always pictured him with a gruff or gravelly voice, reminiscent of your typical "badass warrior/leader". Something can still be comforting and soothing for the right ears, but without losing its commanding presence and tone

trilljacker6534 on May 1, 2015, 7:06:19 AM

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trilljacker6534that is is awesome way to hear him.

LordHigurashi on May 1, 2015, 6:24:23 PM

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LordHigurashiIf you've ever played Star Wars: The Old Republic, Amon's voice would be similar to the Male Bounty Hunter, or Andronikos Revel, one of the Inquisitor's companions

trilljacker6534 on May 1, 2015, 9:08:15 PM

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trilljacker6534Thanks for the info.

LordHigurashi on May 1, 2015, 9:18:24 PM

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LordHigurashiIt's always good to have context when hearing a character's creator describe their voice or personality

trilljacker6534 on April 28, 2015, 9:17:32 PM

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trilljacker6534Damn that was really amazing at the end and you should add a bit more to this chapter saying how they all had a hand in fighting. I hope he finds a way out of there soon.

LordHigurashi on April 28, 2015, 9:24:57 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, I finished writing Chapter 36 literally like, half an hour ago, and I was just trying to get it up tonight as a little birthday present for myself (I turn 22 today). But, it was getting on the longer side of what I normally post for a chapter, and I was satisfied with the emotional impact and battle descriptions, so I gave it my mark of approval. I still need to play through LOQOII again to refresh my memory on what I have to work with and how well I can rewrite it to fit my version of the events so far. Gotta be consistent, y'know?

trilljacker6534 on April 29, 2015, 8:05:35 AM

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trilljacker6534okay to let you know if you got the gold edition the enemies will be harder and I recommend trying to get up to level 50

LordHigurashi on April 29, 2015, 8:43:58 AM

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LordHigurashiOr I can just use the game's Easy Mode so I don't have to take grinding breaks

trilljacker6534 on April 29, 2015, 9:48:35 AM

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trilljacker6534wait there an easy mode to the game.

LordHigurashi on April 29, 2015, 2:01:56 PM

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LordHigurashiYeah. If you start up LOQOII on Easy Mode, you start out at level 50 and can pretty much just sit back and enjoy the story without worrying about strategy

trilljacker6534 on April 12, 2015, 10:10:22 AM

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trilljacker6534They need to retaliate fast now and have a escape plan.

LordHigurashi on April 12, 2015, 12:51:03 PM

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LordHigurashiOh, they'll fight back. And I'll need to start playing the 2nd game again cuz I do NOT remember how Opala and Farah escaped. I just remember that the palace was attacked, they got out, and somehow wound up in Namiria

trilljacker6534 on April 12, 2015, 1:01:26 PM

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trilljacker6534it was through a shadow spike

LordHigurashi on April 12, 2015, 5:35:56 PM

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LordHigurashiOh yeah. Now I can actually finish Chapter 36

trilljacker6534 on April 12, 2015, 6:42:34 PM

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trilljacker6534your welcome

LordHigurashi on April 12, 2015, 7:47:52 PM

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LordHigurashiHey, if I'm thanking you for anything, it's that you seem to be a rabid fan of this little rewrite of mine XD

trilljacker6534 on April 3, 2015, 10:00:17 PM

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trilljacker6534That battle going to be told a lot with rughart.

LordHigurashi on April 3, 2015, 11:12:58 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, for someone to even survive one attack from Altum is worthy of story. For someone to fight ON PAR with and EXHAUST the Dark Knight... Well, let's just say Altum is looking forward to their rematch

trilljacker6534 on April 3, 2015, 9:57:06 PM

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trilljacker6534He will be in a fight of his life right about now

LordHigurashi on April 3, 2015, 11:10:44 PM

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LordHigurashiThere's a reason Amon is known as the Mortal God, ya know

trilljacker6534 on April 3, 2015, 9:55:16 PM

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trilljacker6534Well they met the crazy old man now.

LordHigurashi on April 3, 2015, 11:10:14 PM

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LordHigurashiYup XD Crazy old Murdock is part of the team now

trilljacker6534 on March 17, 2015, 8:01:17 AM

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trilljacker6534Never knew she missed her brother that much and amon better have an smoke bomb or some sort of escape plan with him when he is fighting Altum.

LordHigurashi on March 17, 2015, 9:15:29 AM

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LordHigurashiAgain: Rewrite. And in my version, Osira was devoted to her brother. However, Amon was more infatuated with Farah and Opala, so Osira understandably felt neglected and rejected. She's been repressing her feelings for years, but it all came undone when he cornered her in the late Pharaoh's burial chamber. From this point on, she's going to be helping Amon any way she can without arousing the suspicions of her allies. In other words, I'm pulling stuff out of my ass from here on out XD

trilljacker6534 on March 7, 2015, 8:10:37 PM

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trilljacker6534I am guessing they are going to go up against someone overpowering

LordHigurashi on March 7, 2015, 8:42:14 PM

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LordHigurashiTo be honest, I'm kinda just making it up as I go for a bit since I don't exactly remember how much of a time gap is between LOQO 1 and LOQO 2. I guess I'm trying to figure out the conditions to introduce Rugheart and Altum like they were during the post-game content. Also trying to figure out what to do with Seth since I kinda took some artistic liberties there

trilljacker6534 on March 7, 2015, 9:16:30 PM

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trilljacker6534Yeah seth should be redeemable and realize his mistake for what he has done.

LordHigurashi on March 8, 2015, 7:46:00 AM

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LordHigurashiI agree. Seth has always felt like the 'grizzled old soldier' to me, and I doubt he would've switched sides so easily

trilljacker6534 on February 23, 2015, 1:07:22 PM

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trilljacker6534Looks like jake got lucky too.

LordHigurashi on February 23, 2015, 1:23:29 PM

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LordHigurashiYup. He IS the original protagonist, and since Amon's the territorial type, I figured give Jake and Tirah a side-story together. Give Jake some extra motivation, ya know?

trilljacker6534 on February 18, 2015, 7:27:11 AM

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trilljacker6534Amon is the man all others envy.

LordHigurashi on February 18, 2015, 8:37:41 AM

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LordHigurashiYup. Men wanna be him, women just want him. To coin a phrase: It's good to be the king

trilljacker6534 on January 20, 2015, 9:09:33 AM

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trilljacker6534Now the winds of madness is about to come down on them and how will the new party be looking like.

LordHigurashi on January 20, 2015, 9:50:18 AM

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LordHigurashiThe "Second Chapter" of this epic is actually going to be somewhat divided, part of it following the game directly with me adding dialog or extra emotion where I see fit to make the already-compelling story even more awesome, and the other part focusing on Amon as he deals with Osira. I have a lot planned, but I never finished the 2nd game, so I don't know how well my ideas will work out. Here's hoping, though!

trilljacker6534 on January 17, 2015, 7:35:58 AM

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trilljacker6534I can't wait to see the next part starts.

LordHigurashi on January 17, 2015, 9:40:46 AM

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LordHigurashiYup. Big doin's are on the way

trilljacker6534 on December 24, 2014, 9:27:32 PM

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trilljacker6534Merry Christmas and nice new chapter

LordHigurashi on December 25, 2014, 8:44:13 AM

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LordHigurashiMerry Christmas and happy holidays to you as well :) Glad you liked it. I wanted to at least add SOMETHING before the end of 2014, and chapter 25 may be short, but it DOES set up the events surrounding the second game

trilljacker6534 on November 1, 2014, 4:46:15 PM

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trilljacker6534you should probably add the part where they meet atlum for the first time

LordHigurashi on November 1, 2014, 5:09:22 PM

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LordHigurashiI do plan to expand on the first part before writing the sequel, including the meetings with Altum and Rugheart as well as the Arena fights on Festival Island and the whole Wintero thing. And MAYBE go into more detail about what Amon felt on the way to Athrosa the first time

trilljacker6534 on November 1, 2014, 4:30:09 PM

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trilljacker6534look like he finally gets that rest.

LordHigurashi on November 1, 2014, 5:06:50 PM

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LordHigurashiWell-earned and well-deserved

trilljacker6534 on October 24, 2014, 10:46:33 PM

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trilljacker6534I bet he will be out for hours or days after those fights and he didn't even take a break not even once.

LordHigurashi on October 24, 2014, 10:59:07 PM

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LordHigurashiHe is the Mortal God. But yeah, he's pretty much gonna be on house arrest for a while by a combined order of a certain Queen and Matriarch. But I'd say he's earned his rest. He saved his family, his home, and his nation all at once. But it's not quite over yet. Jake and the others still need recognition for their service to the Royal Family, some filler sex scenes before the events of the second game, and then I have to figure out how I'm gonna instigate the second part because I took some liberties with my version that would normally cancel out the events of the sequel

trilljacker6534 on October 24, 2014, 8:15:26 AM

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trilljacker6534I hope you make a sequel to this story

LordHigurashi on October 24, 2014, 11:49:24 AM

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LordHigurashiI fully intend to :)

trilljacker6534 on October 24, 2014, 8:12:15 AM

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trilljacker6534The way they talked about amon was great and my picture of him fighting is something like batman kicking ass

LordHigurashi on October 24, 2014, 11:49:07 AM

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LordHigurashiWell, in the game Jake and his friends only fight ONE Giga Lardo, but I took some artistic liberty and spiced up the battle. And in ancient traditions, the Pharaoh was considered to be a mortal god so I thought I'd make Amon's ability to fight three massive monsters on his own without any support reflect this. Also, while I DID leave out the fight against Khaan in Osira's lair, I'm going all out in the final battle in the Pharaoh's tomb

trilljacker6534 on October 15, 2014, 10:28:57 AM

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trilljacker6534They better run fast back to athrosa right now.

LordHigurashi on October 15, 2014, 6:17:21 PM

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LordHigurashiOh, they're gonna be hauling anus back to the village XD

trilljacker6534 on September 18, 2014, 10:03:42 AM

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trilljacker6534Nice to see her and I thought the other was with him in the dream too.

LordHigurashi on September 18, 2014, 10:06:03 AM

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LordHigurashiArtistic license, my friend XD

trilljacker6534 on September 17, 2014, 9:59:49 PM

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trilljacker6534Now it time for the ass kicking to begin.

LordHigurashi on September 17, 2014, 10:32:19 PM

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LordHigurashiHehe. Yup. But not all is well back in the Capitol. If you remember the ending, I shouldn't have to say more. But for now, Amon and his party have every intention of taking the fight straight to Osira. However, getting to her is only half the battle. Osira's more than ready for her baby brother, and she won't be going easy on him

trilljacker6534 on September 11, 2014, 9:17:55 PM

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trilljacker6534Glad Gath talked some reason to them and the way you ended the chapter makes me think of who is coming next.

LordHigurashi on September 11, 2014, 11:14:19 PM

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LordHigurashiI chose to write it this way, alternating between what's going on with Amon and Jake, because in the first game, there isn't much interaction between the party members. This has also been fun for me because the personalities of Gath'D, Dargon and the others are never really explored in depth so it gives me a chance to add more to the already amazing story Gabe gave to us all. And I was originally going to hint at the Evil storyline by having Jake fake like he's turned against the Royal Family so he can sabotage Osira's plans from inside her own ranks. But I decided against it cuz I didn't think it'd flow too well. And the next chapter will bring me back to the game because I don't remember exactly what happens next. I'll just say this: This journey will not be easy for Amon, and it will test his faith in the gods and his devotion to his family.

Drakran on July 27, 2014, 1:29:19 PM

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Drakrangood chapter hope that soon will come more

LordHigurashi on July 27, 2014, 2:00:49 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, between real life kicking my ass and trying to get an indie game company off the ground with no funding, I don't exactly have a lot of time for personal projects like this. But, I'll work on it whenever I can, and hopefully I can MAKE some time to bang out chapters a little faster

Drakran on May 15, 2014, 4:25:33 AM

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Drakranwill there soon come a chapter to?

LordHigurashi on May 15, 2014, 5:13:55 AM

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LordHigurashiI'm dealing with a lot of real life stuff right now, but chapter 15 IS in the the works, and it'll be worth the wait, I assure you. Please be patient

trilljacker6534 on April 8, 2014, 8:11:25 PM

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trilljacker6534he just need to get the last three and then he will be set to defeat osira and can't wait to see that next scene when he wakes up.

LordHigurashi on April 8, 2014, 10:26:32 PM

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LordHigurashiGood to see you're paying attention XD And I've been looking forward to this one a lot, myself. Lady Farah show knows how to take care of her children, no denying that. But her bond with Amon is rather special, as he's sorta taken over his father's duties after his death, both as a royal of Egypt, and when it comes to taking care of Farah's needs. He's nothing, if not devoted to his family

trilljacker6534 on April 7, 2014, 11:47:51 AM

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trilljacker6534I wonder what they was sensing from that other path

LordHigurashi on April 7, 2014, 12:08:54 PM

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LordHigurashiIt's a reference to the New Game + mode. I'll leave it at that to avoid spoilers >:)

trilljacker6534 on April 3, 2014, 5:44:58 PM

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trilljacker6534Time for them to head to greece.

LordHigurashi on April 3, 2014, 6:22:24 PM

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LordHigurashiWith a quick return to the Capitol for the "ceremony" of course. And a little mother-son bonding between the Matriarch and her only son. Her only HUMAN son anyway XD Part of what I'm doing with this is including the "hidden" scenes, like the "ceremony" with Opala, and the "wake-up call" from Farah. That's why I put the *Spoiler Alert* in my description

trilljacker6534 on March 17, 2014, 7:40:37 AM

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trilljacker6534Great chapter but you need to put some line spaces in.

LordHigurashi on March 17, 2014, 7:56:43 AM

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LordHigurashi-_- THought I did... Fuckin' clipboard screwed me over...

trilljacker6534 on February 28, 2014, 8:56:00 AM

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trilljacker6534Love this bit and I can't wait to see them get to greek and meet their new party members

LordHigurashi on February 28, 2014, 9:11:29 AM

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LordHigurashiIt's gonna be fun on the bun XD But before that, I want to add a sex scene or two with Opala. I mean, she IS the Queen after all ^_^

trilljacker6534 on February 24, 2014, 6:30:56 AM

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trilljacker6534A tender loving family moment.

LordHigurashi on February 24, 2014, 10:53:48 AM

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LordHigurashiThe family that plays together stays together. I've been wanting to do the stable scene since chapter 3, but couldn't figure out the best way to set it up. It just seemed right to put it after Amon's near-death at Osira's spell, sort of like Farah's own unique way of helping her son recover as well as taking his mind off his troubles for a little while. I can't exactly work in the Jake-Opala romance, due to my actively including the other party characters more prominently, but Jake IS going to have his own side-story, chapters that focus on him and the other party members throughout the game, while the "main" story focuses on the Royal Family directly

trilljacker6534 on February 23, 2014, 6:28:58 PM

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trilljacker6534I bet the others were KO too or dargon protected them.

LordHigurashi on February 23, 2014, 6:37:55 PM

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LordHigurashiNaturally. Like I'm gonna kill off 4 of the heroes in one scene XD That'd just be a dick move AND bad writing. The next chapter won't be as serious, going back to erotic goodness for a little while as the guys recover from the encounter with Osira (The point in the game that'd be devoted to mob grinding before going to Greece for the first time)

trilljacker6534 on February 23, 2014, 7:41:38 AM

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trilljacker6534Great chapter and love that you added the dialogue to it too.

LordHigurashi on February 23, 2014, 11:14:41 AM

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LordHigurashiOf course I did. The story wouldn't be as good without dialog

trilljacker6534 on February 22, 2014, 10:37:36 PM

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trilljacker6534This is a great way to introduce these two

LordHigurashi on February 22, 2014, 11:27:42 PM

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LordHigurashiWell, I thought since in the first game, there's no real interaction between Jake and the various partners he recruits throughout the game, I'd have to improvise their personalities and dialog somewhat to give them more dimension. I honestly thought I'd rushed introducing Jake and Gath'D a little, but it was the best I could come up with at 12:30 AM. I'm definitely gonna enjoy writing Chapter 7, I can tell ya that much

trilljacker6534 on February 22, 2014, 11:36:31 PM

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trilljacker6534You are right in 2 get to know each character and in one you have little interactions with each one.

LordHigurashi on February 23, 2014, 1:00:14 AM

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LordHigurashiYep. I plan on doing a tribute to the sequel in this same style. I thought, I'm doing the first game, why not pay tribute to the second as well?

trilljacker6534 on February 22, 2014, 7:54:10 PM

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trilljacker6534I can't wait to see who is going to help him

LordHigurashi on February 22, 2014, 8:01:47 PM

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LordHigurashiI'm basing the help on my current "from-scratch" run of the game, so we'll see how the story shapes itself as I play

trilljacker6534 on February 22, 2014, 12:55:04 PM

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trilljacker6534Amon better get ready for a major surprise.

LordHigurashi on February 22, 2014, 1:09:27 PM

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LordHigurashiI'm actually really glad you're enjoying my work :) I just hope I'm doing Gabe's wonderful characters proper justice. I've also decided to work in as many of the additional "party members" that I can remember actually keeping for extended lengths of time, including Jake himself. Gonna have to start a new file to make sure I introduce them at the proper times of course

trilljacker6534 on February 22, 2014, 1:28:50 PM

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trilljacker6534Yeah I made sure to get gath'd when I started the game

LordHigurashi on February 22, 2014, 1:35:53 PM

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LordHigurashiGath'D and Dargon are good early support. Gath'D is useful against a few Legendaries due to his Wind-alligned weapons and anti-avian specials. And Dargon's healing abilities are decent until postgame. Tirah and Phalen are great offensive support for the same reason

trilljacker6534 on February 22, 2014, 7:36:08 AM

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trilljacker6534I bet amon will meet up with jake soon

LordHigurashi on February 22, 2014, 9:33:46 AM

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LordHigurashiI haven't decided if I'm gonna put Jake in this, but what I do know is the next chapter is gonna involve Striker in some way. Haven't figured out how, yet, but it's what's next on my list of events

trilljacker6534 on February 18, 2014, 7:53:22 AM

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trilljacker6534i hope to see some great scenes in this story

LordHigurashi on February 18, 2014, 2:14:25 PM

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LordHigurashiAll I can promise is that I will try to do Gabe's wonderful characters proper justice. Thank you for reading :)

Drakran on February 17, 2014, 1:58:55 PM

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Drakrangood chapter hope there will soon be more

LordHigurashi on February 17, 2014, 4:54:38 PM

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LordHigurashiThere will be, don't worry. I mean, once I figure out what the next chapter should BE


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