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The Trials of Slaanesh

A doubtful and Weary Sister of Battle, Jessica Prissila Antonia, makes a deal with a Daemon of Slaanesh to be freed from her duty to the God-Emperor of Mankind in exchange for service. What Jessica doesn't know yet is that service to Slaanesh tends to lead to dirty work, such as giving near constant sexual servitude to endless hordes of wild people/monsters/animals/daemons/frank/robots/random geography/et cetera. Unhinged sexual hijinks ensue...   content warnings at the start of chapters.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Seduction of Jessica
Submitted: April 25, 2017 • Updated: July 2, 2017
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Chapter 2 - Magic Carpet
Submitted: April 28, 2017 • Updated: July 2, 2017
Word count: 3502 • Size: 19k • Comments: 0 • views: 4283

Chapter 3 - Enter Syl, Stage Right
Submitted: April 30, 2017 • Updated: July 6, 2017
Word count: 5250 • Size: 28k • Comments: 0 • views: 3736

Chapter 4 - Fucking Dogs like a Noble.
Submitted: May 6, 2017 • Updated: July 8, 2017
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Chapter 5 - The Haven proper
Submitted: May 15, 2017 • Updated: July 17, 2017
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Chapter 6 - The Child of the Emperor
Submitted: June 11, 2017 • Updated: June 11, 2017
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Chapter 7 - Selianae’s Arena
Submitted: July 20, 2017 • Updated: July 20, 2017
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Chapter 8 - The Great Beast of Lady Selianae
Submitted: July 23, 2017 • Updated: July 23, 2017
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Chapter 9 - The Lady Selianae
Submitted: September 27, 2017 • Updated: October 1, 2017
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Chapter 10 - The Fall of House Antonia
Submitted: October 8, 2017 • Updated: October 8, 2017
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Chapter 11 - Jessica in the Arena
Submitted: December 6, 2017 • Updated: December 6, 2017
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Chapter 12 - Punishment and Reward
Submitted: January 23, 2018 • Updated: April 25, 2018
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Chapter 13 - Punishment and Reward II
Submitted: April 25, 2018 • Updated: April 25, 2018
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Chapter 14 - Punishment and Reward III
Submitted: May 7, 2018 • Updated: May 7, 2018
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Chapter 15 - Farm Life Of A Sex Slave Part One: Bull Soother
Submitted: November 28, 2018 • Updated: November 28, 2018
Word count: 5539 • Size: 30k • Comments: 0 • views: 1573

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thommyinnl on July 1, 2019, 6:38:00 AM

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thommyinnlDear NikNak, I was wondering if you plan on continuing the lustful adventures of Jessica and her Battle-Sisters. I have to say, it was the first story of it's kind I've read, and while I've also found a ton of other "inspiring" texts here on HF, I still like Jessica's endeavours the best. Maybe because she was my first in this regard :-) 
Cheers, 
One impatient fanboy

Niknak9119 on July 1, 2019, 2:45:25 PM

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Niknak9119
Hey, man! =D
I'm so glad that you liked the story so much.
Sadly, the story is in a state of Limbo atm which is becoming an ever-increasing bummer for me since it was the thing that got me started on here.
Basically, I have a myriad of issues in terms of focus, time, and planning.
I've made some big changes in how I plan and write my stories to make them easier to handle.
The problem is that Trials, at its core, is a very large story that was quite too big for me in terms of how I planned it out.
Now, I DO NOT want to stop at all. But this means that I may change things up a bit in terms of how these are handled.
Namely, the chapters will mostly be shorter and more focused since a lot of my stuff has been getting larger and larger, to the point of expanding the time to edit and stress exponentially.
I will also be working on a lot of other things to keep my pallet varied and to prevent burn out. Hopefully, that should all work to make things better.
I do have a chapter in the works that's been left unfinished. I guess I should get back to it to sate that impatience of yours.
Thanks again for the read!



FuzzyBacon on December 1, 2018, 3:32:46 PM

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FuzzyBaconGood to see your back Niknak.

Niknak9119 on December 2, 2018, 11:29:10 AM

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Niknak9119Great to be back =D

stads on November 29, 2018, 5:31:46 AM

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stadsnice chapter thx for writing it good to see her having fun with the farm live

Niknak9119 on November 29, 2018, 2:05:48 PM

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Niknak9119Thank you for reading!
The Cannoness is gonna have a lot more fun yet, I can promise you that!

alphapsideltaepsilon on November 29, 2018, 3:18:16 AM

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alphapsideltaepsilonI do enjoy seeing more of our former canoness. I just wish it had more tentacles in it.

Niknak9119 on November 29, 2018, 2:04:04 PM

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Niknak9119I can never leave her out of the spot light for that long.
She's too fun to write!
Don't worry about the tentacles coz I'm sure there are gonna be a  LOT more in the future. ;)

Niknak9119 on November 29, 2018, 2:04:59 PM

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Niknak9119And Thank you!
(I post these responses too quickly =/)

Dirtydan412 on November 29, 2018, 1:08:14 AM

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Dirtydan412I really liked Chapter 15 and its saving of the farm. Welcome back =)

Niknak9119 on November 29, 2018, 2:01:21 PM

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Niknak9119Glad to be back, man! =D
Angelica is gonna get up to a lot more in her new home to make sure it's even safer, to be sure.

Niknak9119 on November 29, 2018, 2:01:40 PM

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Niknak9119And thanks a lot!

Assmaner on November 28, 2018, 1:54:40 PM

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Niknak9119 on November 28, 2018, 1:55:56 PM

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Niknak9119But of course!
Thanks again, man!

Niknak9119 on May 20, 2018, 2:42:51 AM

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Niknak9119HEY, Y'ALL!!!

Here is a link to a request picture I got from a raffle!

//bridesroom.ru/xxxmomtube/pictures/user/PillowPrincess/598600/Willing-Damned---Raffle-Winner-2

It's of Syl and Jessica and I think the picture turned out really well!

Give the artists some love by visiting their profile and checking out their other works!

Magnus147 on May 19, 2018, 11:56:25 PM

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Magnus147OH BOY THIS STORY. This is probably the best written 40k erotica I've seen, and I've perused many! Thank you so much for this!

Niknak9119 on May 20, 2018, 2:39:49 AM

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Niknak9119Thank you, dude! =D
More is on the way to be sure!
It just might take a bit of a while. XP

ReddandWhyte on May 12, 2018, 1:14:42 AM

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ReddandWhyteKeep up the great work!

Niknak9119 on May 13, 2018, 10:05:51 AM

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Niknak9119Thanks, you guys!

Dirtydan412 on May 7, 2018, 8:09:23 PM

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Dirtydan412I love the latest chapters Glad everyone Made it home safe lol. I hope the computer issues are an easy fix

Niknak9119 on May 7, 2018, 9:19:41 PM

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Niknak9119Thanks, man! =D
I'm glad you enjoyed them!
The last three chapters were a bit of a shift from the standard sort of stuff I write in this story but I think having variety is decent plan to keep things a bit more fresh.
Hopefully, if it ends up being a faulty part being a problem with the comp, it ain't an expensive one like the graphics card or something!

stads on April 28, 2018, 11:10:17 AM

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stadsnice chapter thx for writing it

Niknak9119 on April 29, 2018, 3:16:41 PM

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Niknak9119My pleasure, as always! =D
More on the way very soon!

Niknak9119 on April 24, 2018, 11:11:28 PM

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Niknak9119Update: My editor and I have decided to change Johanna's name to Joanna cos it sounds better.
Next chapter inbound! =D

Assmaner on April 25, 2018, 2:58:12 AM

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Niknak9119 on April 25, 2018, 5:07:04 AM

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Niknak9119Yes! My editor, everybody! =D

Dirtydan412 on December 6, 2017, 6:01:12 AM

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Dirtydan412Great work with Chapter 11. The Arena scenes are really fun to read. I wonder we'll see on Alliph VII... Cute group of Priestess, Angelica ...more Sisters

Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 6:21:01 AM

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Niknak9119Thank you! I'll say this much about the next chapter: It's going to be about lassoing a new character into the madness of Jessica's journey and having them experience things that they didn't think that they'd ever do. Lookin' forward to getting that out to you all ;) 

Assmaner on December 6, 2017, 8:21:23 AM

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Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 8:27:06 AM

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Niknak9119I do! I was looking at it today in fact ;3
If you want something changed, let me know.

And to anyone who reads this, I do allow offers for entire chapter requests.
So, if you'd like, send me an email through the link on my profile here and we'll talk.
It just might take a while for me to get to writing it up so bear that in mind.

Assmaner on December 6, 2017, 8:45:36 AM

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Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 9:00:54 AM

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Niknak9119Don't worry, I haven't forgotten. ;) 

Assmaner on December 7, 2017, 2:15:19 PM

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Niknak9119 on December 7, 2017, 7:32:22 PM

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Niknak9119Consider the chapter Titled!

stads on December 6, 2017, 1:05:47 PM

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stadsnice chapter thx for writing it wonder what her mission will be and if she will complete is ?

Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 4:32:54 PM

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Niknak9119Thank you!
It's gonna be a bit different than the other chapters but will involve new characters getting "introduced" to the word of Slaanesh ;)

Assmaner on December 6, 2017, 5:57:40 AM

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Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 6:10:13 AM

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Niknak9119I don't recall ever changing her hair in the story. I did it for Angelica at the end of chapter eight. Maybe I forgot ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ (Probably did XD)
Seeing a once pure daughter of the God-Emperor give herself to anyone/anything is certainly a fun shift!

Assmaner on December 6, 2017, 8:19:05 AM

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Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 8:29:16 AM

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Niknak9119You're right!
I'm really flattered that you caught that.
That felt like an age ago!

Assmaner on December 6, 2017, 8:43:40 AM

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Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 9:01:49 AM

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Niknak9119You're too kind!

Undead63 on December 6, 2017, 7:14:14 AM

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Undead63Nice! Another chapter of the kinky adventures!

Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 7:19:50 AM

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Niknak9119Thanks! The Council of Seers predict plenty more kinkiness on its way through the warp ;D

Undead63 on December 6, 2017, 7:38:39 AM

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Undead63Still needs moar tentacles and buttfucking. Tentacles for porn God. Buttfucking to chairs of Dildos???

Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 7:45:55 AM

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Niknak9119There will be plenty more tentacle fun and buttfuckery in the coming chapters, I can assure you! 

Undead63 on December 6, 2017, 7:26:18 AM

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Undead63Yay.

Assmaner on December 6, 2017, 6:00:00 AM

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Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 6:17:05 AM

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Niknak9119That is a fantasy I have all the time.
Hell, the guy/gal doesn't have to be good!
I'd be honored if anyone would put such an effort towards a tribute like that.
Hell, I would grant them a request story and they wouldn't even need to ask for it! 

Assmaner on December 6, 2017, 5:56:09 AM

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Niknak9119 on December 6, 2017, 6:05:53 AM

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Niknak9119Thank you so much! We both share similar cords it seems ;D

Clobworld3 on October 17, 2017, 9:29:39 PM

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Clobworld3This story is great! I cant wait to see what all that destiny business is about. Chapter 3 is my favorite yet I would love to see some more Syl and Jess action. (Maybe Syl getting a temporary elation to greater daemon or something?)

Niknak9119 on October 17, 2017, 9:46:27 PM

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Niknak9119Thanks! I definitely want to write more Syl on Jess stuff down the line.
It would be interesting to see what would happen between them if Syl was made more powerful.
Something like that is bound to happen, maybe even very soon ;D

stads on October 8, 2017, 1:54:48 AM

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stadsnice chapter thx for writing it 
interesting back story will be fun to see what her destiny will be 

Niknak9119 on October 8, 2017, 3:13:07 AM

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Niknak9119Thank you!
I have loads of ideas for her future as a Slaaneshi. Should be fun!

stads on September 28, 2017, 4:54:34 AM

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stadsNice chapter thx for writing it

Niknak9119 on September 28, 2017, 7:20:12 AM

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Niknak9119No problem!
More on the way very soon!

Dirtydan412 on September 27, 2017, 3:24:28 PM

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Dirtydan412nice work on Chapter 9 I hope we get to see Cynthia out of the box

Niknak9119 on September 27, 2017, 3:47:29 PM

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Niknak9119Thanks!
I'm sure that the Lady will find something for Cynthia to do when her pets don't need affection.
It'll probably be just as naughty but at least she'll have options.  

Dirtydan412 on September 27, 2017, 3:55:15 PM

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Dirtydan412Stable Mare-triss Cynthia

Niknak9119 on September 27, 2017, 4:14:16 PM

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Niknak9119She'll probably work in just about every kind of stable the Haven has to offer before long ;D

Dirtydan412 on August 3, 2017, 8:32:42 AM

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Dirtydan412Really Liked the last two chapters 7/8. I'm glad you didn't try to rush or force everything in to one chapter.  It would be funny if angelica "tired" out the krootoxs..(maybe a knarloc or two) too much before the battle or maybe after the battle.

Niknak9119 on August 3, 2017, 10:08:16 AM

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Niknak9119Thanks! Yeah, it was plenty of work just to finish the two chapters separately. I'm happy that I didn't try to do it all at once cause that would have been too damn stressful. Now that Angelica has converted to Chaos, I'm sure that she would "tire out" just about anything the Beastmaster has in his inventory. He's gonna have to be careful with her, to say the least ;)

Assmaner on September 12, 2017, 1:22:04 PM

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Niknak9119 on September 12, 2017, 10:28:37 PM

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Niknak9119Thanks, man! All that power and determination of her character is now being used to make her a supreme fuck toy for the good work of Slaanesh!
As for her hair, well... I think that, when she comes up again, her hair, along with the rest of her, is gonna be changed greatly from when we last saw her in the Haven. 
I won't say how just yet but some of her future owners are gonna make her up in a very different way.

ReddandWhyte on July 21, 2017, 2:46:20 AM

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ReddandWhyteAnother great chapter, the Tau was a fun touch.
As for suggestions, more Chaos Marines and throwing in some hoss dicks somewhere would be awesome!

Niknak9119 on July 21, 2017, 5:01:45 AM

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Niknak9119Thank you so much! I can certainly involve Chaos marines down the road, I got a chapter with more of them in mind. And as for horse cocks...well, I have an idea that I've been developing in my mind for a while now. Let's just say that a horse based chapter is fast approaching. It should be in chapter ten or eleven, I'm not sure yet. Needless to say, I'm dying to get to it ;D

ReddandWhyte on July 24, 2017, 1:03:42 PM

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ReddandWhyteWell, looks like I'll have to wait for that, but good luck with the visual novel!

Niknak9119 on July 24, 2017, 9:27:03 PM

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Niknak9119Thank you!

alphapsideltaepsilon on July 23, 2017, 8:15:17 AM

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alphapsideltaepsilonI have to say, I was hoping for her to resist just a little more, but it was nice to see her finally succumb.
Definitely want to see more of her later and see what Jessica thinks of her after that.

Niknak9119 on July 23, 2017, 8:46:47 AM

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Niknak9119You know, I think your right. It was a bit of a sharper shift than it could have been. I think that when I writing this and chapter seven as a full chapter, it might have made the transition work better with them together. Maybe I should add another paragraph or two of her struggling with herself.
Oh yeah, it's gonna be a shock to Jessica to see her fearless leader turned into an utter nympho!
I got a lot of ideas with Angelica in the future, I can promise you that.

stads on July 20, 2017, 8:21:16 AM

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stadsnice chapter thx for writing 
interesting that a tau was there thought they where not effecting by chaos ?

Niknak9119 on July 20, 2017, 8:50:03 AM

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Niknak9119Thanks, man! As for the Tau thingy...They're not immune to chaos, at least not completely. Contact between the Tau and Chaos has been incredibly rare so the chance for Chaos influence is very small. The only major encounter (That I can remember at least) between Tau forces and Chaos Daemons lead to the formation of the Farsight enclaves which was the only incident of defiance of Tau against the Ethereal caste in their races history. It might be that the exposure to Chaos induced the severing of the Ethereal's control over the forces of Commander Farsight, or I might not have been, it's hard to say. One thing that is true is that the Tau do have a "soul" in the Warp sense of souls. It might be very "dim" in relation to the other races but they have something. They aren't nulls at any rate. All of this blathering from me is to try to justify that, well, I'm sure that if you captured a Tau and infused enough chaos influence you'd get some change. Or, for the sake of my story, I sure hope so XD. Also, stads, if you would like to make a request for me to write anything in the upcoming chapters, please let me know.

stads on July 20, 2017, 9:18:10 AM

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stadshmm missed that battle against the tau
as for request thinking some personal slave's for jessica perhaps her former battle sisters with the mission to train them ?

Niknak9119 on July 20, 2017, 9:40:24 AM

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Niknak9119The battle is called the Molochite Tragedy.
I like the idea of Jessica owning personal slaves. They could be new comers that Jessica will need to "show the ways of Slaanesh," to so that they can better "worship" the prince of pleasure.
As for the other Battle Sisters, It could very likely be that Jessica will out rank them greatly in the Haven and could be granted some of her former comrades as servants and to train them for specific duties and tasks that the Lady might want of them. Sounds like a lot of fun now that you got me brainstorming about it ;D 

Lesota on July 20, 2017, 7:49:12 AM

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LesotaThe amount of heresy in this story is too damn high! I will alert the Inquisition...maybe a little bit later, after another chapter lol. Nice story!

Niknak9119 on July 20, 2017, 7:51:29 AM

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Niknak9119Thanks a million! Glad you enjoyed it.

alphapsideltaepsilon on July 20, 2017, 7:26:35 AM

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alphapsideltaepsilonI really love how the Canoness has been tattooed. And her resistance is really building up nicely to her downfall.

Would love to see 'nids in later parts.

Would also suggest seeing if  you could put in Miriael Sabathiel in there. Girl doesn't get enough love from anyone, apparently.

Niknak9119 on July 20, 2017, 7:34:03 AM

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Niknak9119Thanks, man! I have thought about Miriael to be sure. Not sure how I'd include her just yet but I'm sure that I can think of something for her in the not too distant future. She seems like fertile grounds for some fun ideas.

sinfulwolf on July 1, 2017, 10:23:23 PM

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sinfulwolfA nice first chapter. I'll certainly have to read the rest. However, I do have to point out the formatting. Not sure if it changes in later chapters, but the massive paragraphs could be broken up some to make it easier to read. And something to more clearly point out when there's a change in perspective. You had big gaps between certain paragraphs, yet not others. It was unpredictable and not a clear delineation between shifts if perspective. There's also a few points where you missed a quotation mark. 
Otherwise, nice. Not enough Sister of Battle corruption in my opinion. Always nice to see more.

sinfulwolf on July 1, 2017, 10:25:07 PM

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sinfulwolfThough... looking at other comments it seems this has been pointed out already. Wish I'd read other comments first. 

Niknak9119 on July 1, 2017, 11:09:57 PM

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Niknak9119Yeah, I really need to get around to fixing my earlier chapters up, I've put it off for too long =/
I just keep making new stuff.
I'll definitely get to it soon though, I can assure you of that.
I'm still fairly new at this whole smut writing thing and my writing, in general, does need some work.
Thanks for the criticism, it's always good to hear what needs fixing.
And, considering who you are, I can't tell you how flattering it is that you found my work interesting.
Your and Lucien's work on Dominion's chain is perhaps one of the main inspirations for me to get into this kind of writing in the first place.
Thank you very much!

sinfulwolf on July 2, 2017, 5:54:53 AM

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sinfulwolfWell, it's good to hear I've been part of the inspiration for folk to start getting into smut writing. Keep it up.

alphapsideltaepsilon on June 11, 2017, 8:10:26 AM

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alphapsideltaepsilonThe action in the story is nice, though if there is one criticism to make, it's that the characters don't talk like people from 40k. From dialogues that I've seen in stories and games, they don't use modern day colloquialisms, having a more theatrical tone and pattern a la Shakespeare or something.

Niknak9119 on June 11, 2017, 8:42:17 AM

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Niknak9119Yeah, good point. I've made Syl like that because I figured it would be amusing. But your right, I do need to work on making the dialogue more thematic. I can assure you that the next chapter will have it down better. 

alphapsideltaepsilon on June 11, 2017, 8:44:37 AM

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alphapsideltaepsilonhope we see the canoness then, too.

Niknak9119 on June 11, 2017, 9:07:48 AM

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Niknak9119Yup! I have decided to split the next chapter into two or three chapters, which means the stuff we talked about will get a full chapter all to itself. And that chapter will be chapter 7, so stay tuned.

alphapsideltaepsilon on June 11, 2017, 12:52:41 PM

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alphapsideltaepsilonif you've ever played the dawn of war games, I'd suggest looking over cutscenes to see how the characters talk. It's edifying and entertaining!

Niknak9119 on June 11, 2017, 1:39:48 PM

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Niknak9119I have all of them, don't worry.

stads on June 11, 2017, 10:00:59 AM

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stadsthx for the new chapter guess getting to the lady wont be that easy wonder how many trails she will have

Niknak9119 on June 11, 2017, 10:43:35 AM

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Niknak9119You are very welcome! I imagine that this story will go on for a long time. while I do have an endgame in mind, I imagine that if I ever get tired of writing these, I'll just take a month or two off or something. I have dozens of ideas that I'd love to write up. So, in terms of how many trials Jessica will end up doing, she'll likely have several metric tons worth!  Jessica has almost reached Lady Selianae from where she is now. Jessica, however, doesn't have any idea of what she's in for. Let's just say that Jessica has done very little of worth by Selianae's standards while in her realm and the meeting between the two will be several grades above what Jessica has gone through so far, at the very least. Should be fun.


Niknak9119 on May 28, 2017, 11:30:10 PM

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Niknak9119Important update: I've gotten Ill and I am working to recover.  It might take me a week or two before I can get over this and for that, I am really sorry. The next two updates for my Warhammer and Overwatch stories are nearly done but I have to focus on healing before I can finish them off. Know that I have no desire to stop and really want to keep going and make more fun stuff for you guys. I have been feeling a little bit better with each day but I don't want to risk anything so updates will, unfortunately, be a week or two away. Wish me luck on recovering and Thank you!

Dirtydan412 on June 2, 2017, 6:30:19 PM

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Dirtydan412luck wished feel better soon

guner on May 22, 2017, 10:23:48 AM

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gunerthere a problem with wall of text in a few places, smaller paragraph would help as it easy to find your place if you get... "distracted". some of the issues seem to come from trying to show charter shifts with big spaces.
OC 1


OC2
while this dose work you could also use something like this to show that your switching 
OC1
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OC2

all and all this was fun read 

Niknak9119 on May 22, 2017, 4:53:23 PM

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Niknak9119Thank you very much for the feedback, it's really appreciated. You're not the only one who has criticized the paragraph sizes. It'll take a while to edit each chapter I've put up (But I am going to soon) but the next chapters (Trails ch6 & Overwatch ch2) coming out this week will definitely have smaller paragraphs. I'll try to find a way to improve character transitions to be sure. I've never heard of this [=-=] symbol before and I'll have to look into it more. I'm glad you found the story fun. Thank's for the read!  

guner on May 22, 2017, 11:56:23 PM

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gunerwell really any group of symbles  so you can play around with it and come up with a version you like. it just something you develop when your fighting with writing programs that erase plan === or provide  a line but that will get lost when you go back in to edit older work. 
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Niknak9119 on May 23, 2017, 12:48:39 AM

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Niknak9119Oh, so like a place holder, or a marker.

guner on May 23, 2017, 1:35:22 AM

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gunerthat one way to look at it 

Niknak9119 on May 22, 2017, 9:09:44 PM

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Niknak9119Update: Chapter:6 turned out to be a lot  larger than I thought it would be. Expect to see it later in the week. Also, if anyone catches me spelling thanks with an apostrophe, please find me and slap me! (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻)

stads on May 15, 2017, 11:44:19 AM

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stadsnice to see her battle sisters having there own fun will be interesting to see her explore the realm 

wonder if she can take control or create her own realm later on ?

Niknak9119 on May 15, 2017, 1:26:50 PM

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Niknak9119Yeah, All those Battle Sister are likely having a lot a fun in the Haven  now and there's bound to be more of them poping up later in the story.

Mortals creating their own Daemonic realm requires them to become Daemon princes, which is a really big deal in Warhammer and Warhammer 40k and is extraordinarily rare.  If Jessica was ever to gain that kind of favor, she'd need to do a lot to get the attention of the chaos gods, which is to say, she'd need to get much kinkier and do even more debased sexual nonsense for a very long time, especially if she saught this kind of favor from Slaanesh. Needless to say, Jessica would have a lot of "work" yet to do. ;)

stads on May 6, 2017, 7:57:15 AM

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stadsseem syl is working in her favor for now liked the history bit of the painting nice piece of detail that 

Niknak9119 on May 6, 2017, 5:36:23 PM

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Niknak9119Thank you

stads on May 1, 2017, 12:12:02 PM

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stadsinteresting partnet ship will be fun to she what plan she has for her

Niknak9119 on May 6, 2017, 4:00:25 AM

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Niknak9119For some reason, I only just saw your comment. I saw that it said that there were eight comments but it only showed seven until today, weird. Yea, those two will have a long "Career" together for sure!

Niknak9119 on May 6, 2017, 3:47:51 AM

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Niknak9119I've noticed some issues with using different colored text so I switched it all to default.

stads on April 28, 2017, 6:11:29 AM

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stadsnice story so far looking forward to more 
and yea to the front size got the whole web site set higher 

Niknak9119 on April 28, 2017, 1:53:32 PM

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Niknak9119Thanks, man. So do you think I should adjust the font size or just leave it be?

stads on April 28, 2017, 1:56:07 PM

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stadsjust leave it be perhaps the website font will get changed if not people can change it themselfs to a size they like 

Niknak9119 on April 28, 2017, 2:01:27 PM

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Niknak9119Cool, thanks for your input.

Jackal13 on April 28, 2017, 2:07:54 AM

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Jackal13Great story, font's a little small but otherwise I'm looking forward to seeing just how far she'll fall. Really liked the bestiality.

Niknak9119 on April 28, 2017, 4:13:18 AM

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Niknak9119Thank you, when it comes to font size (Is this ok  112%) (Or is this 150%)   as it stands I can't go between these two sizes due to these being set sized provided by the website's word program. The 112% is what I have it at now, but if you think the 150% isn't too large I'll definitely consider increasing it to that size. As for the story, thank you very much for the compliment, it means a lot. I have a whole bunch more planned for Jess and if you liked chapter 2 then you'll probably be satisfied with what coming next. Stay tuned!  

Jackal13 on April 28, 2017, 10:00:37 AM

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Jackal13Nothing in between those sizes eh, well hell I guess see what stads thinks. I look forward to the next chapter.


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